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The school had just finished for the weekend, and a storm was gradually getting worse, trees swinging violently back and forth as the gust of wind became stronger. No one dared to walk in that, but Ashley and Alison did. They lived much further than everyone else as they were brought up by a wealthy family and lived in a big house at the far end of Boomer village. The girls were well known in the village and got on with everyone, but that night everything changed for the sisters.
As the weather gradually got worse they found a quicker way home by walking through a park, "many stories have been told about that park. Once you enter there is no way of being free again" said Alison. The sister stopped for a second and Alison started to tell
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From the distance Ashley saw something, she couldn’t make out what it was as the fog was so thick and her body began to feel like it was tightening, but all she could see was this blur in the distance just sitting slowly moving around like it was on something making it move "this is like a ghostly nightmare in a movie that I hope I would never experience, I feel sick" sobbed Ashley. Something inside them said they couldn’t turn back and forget what they saw so they both steadily started to get closer to the park as they were both anxious to figure out what this blur was. Ashley and Alison got closer and there was a noise, a screeching noise like someone was dragging their nails across a chalkboard. Ashley and Alison waited for a brief moment, both frightened, closing their eyes and silently hoping this nightmare to end, allowing them to both get on with their lives and say "remember that time" Alison quickly got her phone out and switched the torch on, she was terrified, her hand shaking while slowly moving the torch around the park, she was far too scared to even look so Ashley had to be the one to keep her eyes open to see anything strange. While Alison was moving the torch she pointed it in the direction where the screeching sound was coming from, it was just an old roundabout which was moving …show more content…
The girls went closer together joining their hands. As Ashley looked up, there right in front of her in the distance her eyes caught a glimpse of the blur again. "Come on you got to of seen that this time," said Ashley, Alison never saw a thing, the faster we move the faster we will be home and forget this nightmare. As they began to get their way out of the park a shiver of fear ran up both of the sisters spines and both said "Grim Slayer". The girls started to walk faster to get away and ended up reaching a field, the girls ran for their lives through the field thinking it was better rather being in that park. Ashley stopped and looked back as she heard footstep again but this time the footsteps were closer to her than before, she was scared stiff beginning to panic being frozen still but Alison kept on going, but as soon as Alison looked back for her sister, she noticed Ashley wasn’t behind her, She shouted "ASHLEY!!" At the top of her lungs but as she turned around, shining her torch in front and there it appeared, it was standing right in front of her, circling Alison. She stood in one spot, not taking her eyes of the green big bold eyes staring back at her about to rip out her

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