Brooks begins by mentioning the health setbacks accompanied with the use of Marijuana by stating that it is addictive in one in six teenagers and that I.Q loss can happen. He then goes on to state his embarrassing moments and how his friends, along with him, came to stop using the drug. It seems as though the author starts off from a logical point of view [LOGOS] and then he begins to play on the emotions [PATHOS] of the readers by using his embarrassing moment to evoke a sense of sympathy. The author’s tone is almost condescending in this article because he implies that if a person smokes pot, they don’t have a bright future ahead of them.
The author has made his argument; now let’s take a look at how the readers responded to this article. New York Times readers have voted on the comments they thought were the best and the top three comments go against the author’s views. The top comment comes from Gemli who was not persuaded Brooks’ play on emotions and used the author’s prior articles to build their argument. They mention, “This is a favorite theme of Mr. Brooks: People of Quality rise to the top, while lesser sorts wallow in a despair of their own making.” Gemli disproves this [LOGOS?] by implying that everyone has different circumstances. It can be harder for some to make it out of poverty than others. Towards the end of the comment, they add a touch of comic relief [PATHOS?] by stating, “See what happens when stoners grow up to write columns in the Times? Kids, please, don’t smoke!”
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