I liked the fact that he did give so many examples of women doing awesome things, but they all mostly took place a while ago, or he didn’t go too in-depth with the details. His use of Clinton is recent, but he doesn’t touch too heavily on her either, he focuses on Emmett. Some older stories were about the women voters for health care and the women at Princeton. While these are solid examples, they happened long ago and it almost seems like women haven’t done anything good in the past couple years. To make this piece better he should add in some examples from the past five years. Kristof should think about adding in some charitable work or some extraordinary examples that involve women
I liked the fact that he did give so many examples of women doing awesome things, but they all mostly took place a while ago, or he didn’t go too in-depth with the details. His use of Clinton is recent, but he doesn’t touch too heavily on her either, he focuses on Emmett. Some older stories were about the women voters for health care and the women at Princeton. While these are solid examples, they happened long ago and it almost seems like women haven’t done anything good in the past couple years. To make this piece better he should add in some examples from the past five years. Kristof should think about adding in some charitable work or some extraordinary examples that involve women