Cited: Bazerman, Charles. “A Relationship between Reading and Writing: The Conversational Model.” College English 41.6 (1980), 656-661. Craik, Fergus I. M. “ Memory Changes in Normal and Pathological Aging.” Canadian Journal of Psychiatry 53.6 (2008): 343-345 Melzer, Dan, et al, eds. Student Writing Handbook. Sacramento, CA: Sacramento State University, 2009. Well written draft showing strong CCA of the RS and its components. See my margin comments for specific revision instructions toward the quality grade of the portfolio draft. My margin comments begin with [b]. Remember that the (quality) score of the final portfolio draft depends upon revision of this draft even if this draft got a very high (completeness) score. Margin annotations are missing. 47
Cited: Bazerman, Charles. “A Relationship between Reading and Writing: The Conversational Model.” College English 41.6 (1980), 656-661. Craik, Fergus I. M. “ Memory Changes in Normal and Pathological Aging.” Canadian Journal of Psychiatry 53.6 (2008): 343-345 Melzer, Dan, et al, eds. Student Writing Handbook. Sacramento, CA: Sacramento State University, 2009. Well written draft showing strong CCA of the RS and its components. See my margin comments for specific revision instructions toward the quality grade of the portfolio draft. My margin comments begin with [b]. Remember that the (quality) score of the final portfolio draft depends upon revision of this draft even if this draft got a very high (completeness) score. Margin annotations are missing. 47