I think my strongest essay is Rhetorical analysis essay about Tobias Wolff’s “Bullet in the brain.” I spent so much time on the assignment and introduction is good. I think the introduction is one of important part of the essay. Because the introduction grab reader’s attention and make them to read more. I had to follow the instruction given by the professor. I stated my specific topic and I wrote about one topic in my whole assignment. I read the book over and over again, and I analyzed the book from a certain point of view like a book critic. My work was well organized into paragraphs. Each paragraph focused of a single part. Also, I used transitions to help my assignment flow more smoothly.…
The court also discovered that juveniles under the age of seventeen are more likely to be rehabilitated in comparison to adults which is why juveniles should not be offered the death penalty. It was argued by the courts that most juveniles cannot be fully blamed for their actions due to being so undeveloped. It was also argued that juveniles are more likely not to be deterred from committing a crime by being threatened with the death penalty due to the lack of cognitive skills they have in comparison to…
It was noted that while juveniles are capable of committing truly heinous crimes, they are not fully culpable for three main reasons. The first reason discussed was that juveniles under the age of eighteen lack the maturity and responsibility that adults have attained. This shortcoming causes decisions and subsequent actions to be poorly thought out. Basically, juveniles are not responsible decision makers. This idea was supported by the fact that most states do not allow minors to vote, do jury duty, or get married without consent. The second rationale for why juveniles are less culpable than adults dealt with environment. It was suggested that juveniles lack control over their environment. They do not have the ability to remove themselves from an environment that encourages delinquency. Finally, juveniles are less culpable because they are still developing a sense of self identity. This suggests that behaviors exhibited now may not be part of their character in five or ten years, allowing for recovery. The majority then argued that the same reasoning they used in Stanford v. Kentucky applied to Roper v. Simmons, and that the eighth amendment did not allow for the execution of people under age eighteen due to lesser culpability (Counsel of Record,…
The majority advances their argument by listing some of the mental differences between adults and juveniles such as: “susceptibility to immature behavior”, lack of control over their environment and the peers that come with it, the ability to undergo a character change. These factors were enough for the Court to find the age group a suspect class and hold that they have diminished culpability, at least to an extent that the death penalty becomes an excessive…
All can relate to that one special time of the year, Christmas, when whole families unite and spend hours endlessly sharing stories, making memories, and of course, opening presents! What happens though, when all of the sentimental value of Christmas is replaced solely with physical value, the gifts? What would Christmas be like then? Richard Rodriguez takes the readers through one of his annual Christmases and brings to light, through his thoughts, the disconnect that exists between himself, his siblings, and his parents. Rodriguez’ chronological presentation of events with flashbacks, short, abrupt syntax, light-hearted attention to detail and concerned tone contribute to suggest his worried attitude toward his family.…
Paul Thompson in the article “Startling on Teenage Brains” argues that teens should face the consequences just like if an adult did the crime. Thompson supports his claim by first demonstrating the story of 13 year old Nathaniel Brazill who killed his teacher and was accused of second-degree murder. He then explains how the brain gets different systems at a certain age and the reason why teens get very aggressive easily and can't control their actions we have frontal lobes. Lastly the author explains how many people think that teens are not yet adults and that the legal system should not affect them as much. Thompsons purpose is to inform people that the teenagers are not fully aware of their actions so that they don't get punished like if they…
"I would hope that when a woman goes into a physician, with a rape issue, that that physician will indeed ask her about perhaps her marriage was this pregnancy caused by normal relations in a marriage, or was it truly caused by a rape." - Idaho Senator Chuck Winder (New Republic)…
“They’re not acting on impulse”. According to Paul Thompson who wrote the article, “Startling finds on teenage brains”. This discusses the development of the adolescent brain and how teens who commit crimes are doing it out of some sort of peer pressure or naivety. Thompson’s states, “brain cells and connections are only being lost in the areas controlling impulses, risk-taking, and self-control. These frontal lobes, which inhibit our violent passions, rash actions, and regulate our emotions, are vastly immature throughout the teenage years.” Thompson argues this with the minority group who believe that teens who commit crimes should go to…
Not too long ago the House of Representatives approved “The Juvenile Crime Control Act of 1997” which would greatly increase the number of juveniles convicted and incarcerated in adult facilities. When I was made aware of this I took it upon myself to research juveniles tried as which in turn caused me to question whether juveniles should be tried as adult. Many claim that the age of the juvenile does not matter, if the child is old enough to do the crime they must do the time. On the contrary, I came to find that not only age but mental development in terms of cognitive development, the development of mental maturity and, formulation of personal identity have a lot to do with how the…
Juveniles makes bad decision but it doesn’t necessarily mean they’re all bad, majority of them steal or choose a bad path. Everybody makes mistakes but doesn’t mean they all should get a punishment that makes them suffer for the rest of their life. Researches say “among them the discovery of striking changes taking place during the teen years. These findings have…
Adolescence prove through their capability of committing crimes that they have the capacity to obtain punishment equal to adults in America. Adolescence who commit murder have proven, “They know how to buy a gun, load it with ammunition, point it and shoot it,” yet their ability to mentally handle prosecution often is still questioned (“Should CHILDREN Be Tried As, ADULTS?”). Found within a magazine article was the story of “two teenagers, aged 14 and 15, were charged in connection with the slaughter of four people…,” which can only be described as a heinous crime (Brunet). If two teenagers have the mental capacity to murder four people, they have…
¨Children who commit serious crimes still have the ability to change their lives for the better. It is now time for state and federal officials to take positive steps by enacting policies that seek to redeem children, instead of throwing them in prison for the rest of their lives.” This is a quote from David Berger, who is a Deputy District Attorney for the County of Los Angeles, California. He believes that juveniles should not be charged as adults, even if the crime they committed is considered a ´tragedy´ and is thought to be ´horrid´. But we should not try juveniles as adults for many reasons.…
”(Lundstrom, 12) This gives another example of how juveniles can be easily influenced and shouldn’t be tried as a mature adult. This reinforces the idea that juveniles should be trialed as children. Many juveniles cause trouble because they can't escape their…
He recalled being unnerved being asked questions like “If I kill someone, can I be executed?” To which Garcetti responded “No.” He was also asked “ Right now, I'm under sixteen. If I kill someone, I get out of prison when I'm twenty five, right?” again Garcetti confirmed the boy's belief, “Right” he said. This juvenile only needs to weigh the risk and benefits to whatever he wants to do because the court system will not do to him what it would do to someone else over eighteen.…
O’Neill, Lindsey. (2008). should juveniles be tried for crimes as adults? Retrieved December 8, 2012,…