Roller Coaster Descriptive Writing

As you gradually yet assuringly reach your way to the highest point of the lofty slope, you look to your side and see the ground beneath you creeping without end as you advance towards the skies. As you reach the top, your thoughts are muddled; fear, fervor, apprehension...As the cart arrives at a sudden stop, your heart is in your throat; you look to your front to see that you have reached the peak of giant slope. A silence hangs, as the riders get ready for the stomach-turning plunge. Before you know it, your heart is in your throat, your stomach turning as you watch the hands of fellow riders sway in the air. The speed starts to increase by the second, the breeze blows through your hair, you feel yourself shaking due to the coasters twists and turns and then all that energy ceases to a stop, the adventure is officially over. It leaves your head turning in a way you had never envisioned. You move out of your seat, your legs are shaking, and mysteriously you
First of all, the height of the first hill is 80 meters (262 feet), so the velocity of my rollercoaster as it goes down the first hill is 39.6 meters/second (129 feet/second). Next, my rollercoaster follows a slope that is similar to the path of a projectile in free fall and it includes a curve at the bottom. This would allow the passengers in the cart to smoothly reach the next part of the path. Then, there is an exit path which is a low sloped path, allowing the riders to travel up the second hill. This low sloped path would allow the riders to smoothly reach the second hill, which going at a fast velocity. The second hill is 70 meters (230 feet) and the cart is traveling at an optimum velocity for the rest of the ride of __ meters/second. Lastly, the second hills allows a path to the elliptical loop, which has a height of 35 meters and velocity of __