San Diego Descriptive Writing

This August I went on a trip to San Diego which was very entertaining. It started when my parents told me . I was happy but sad because I was going on a trip and sad because I had to wait a long time to go . We took a plane it was fun at the end only because someone got a toilet paper roll birthday cake. After me and my mom , dad , and grandma got off the plane we got our bags and waited for a taxi. The hotel was beautiful but they had horrible service . We got two rooms which we waited for 2hrs for . We stayed in the hotel the first day but not the next. The 2nd day I checked with my mom and grandma we found a lot of different stores. The same day we checked out a lot of San Diego by walking . When we finished checking out San Diego my parents
My parents stayed there and I decided to walk back to the hotel. They came back around 10pm and I was already sleeping . After that day it's been my 3rd day here and today my brother came to San Deigo from San Deigo from Seattle . This day all we did was check out the mall again to get some clothes and eat food . We went to the mall around three and came back at 4pm . We relaxed at the hotel until everyone got hungry we went out to eat at a crab place . After I ate with my family we came back and slept. My 4th day here we put on are nice clothes nice enough to be for a wedding and went we headed to the beach .The beach had pretty gold speckled sand . We hoped on rocks and picked sea shells . The ride to and back was very fun we took a fairy boat and on our way back I saw an octopus .Later that night all my family and I went to the Cheesecake factory . This is my 5th day here and today we went to see a retired navy boat . This boat was huge and very expense and had many features . Before we went to see the navy boat we packed up are things this was around 4pm .We only spent 3hrs here