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Sensory Devices In Red Lily
When looking at poems, readers tend to read it over and analyze it based on what is provided to them by the poet. While writing poems, authors tend not to incorporate devices that may entice the senses of their readers, but that is not the case for “Red Lily.” Between poems that use sensory devices like “Red Lily” and poems that don’t, the addition of sensory devices to the poem “Red Lily” creates a more intense feeling and emotion through the aid of aural and visual implementations to enhance the experience of reading the poem for the audience. After looking over the poem without sound first and with sound second, a distinction was noted in how the reader would feel once the poem was over. As the poem is playing online without sound, it can …show more content…
The poet’s intentions could be first creating the vibe that it was written in a child’s style of writing so that he or she could lead on into the setting as the poet starts off with what they thought when they were a child. The poem also has some visuals in between the text rolling through the screen to attempt to tell the reader a story, but pictures like the eye and the girl with the ducklings, created the thought that the pictures seemed like they were out of place. Aside from the odd visuals, the reader could feel confused as to what they read textually or felt another emotion or feeling that the poet might not have intended for the reader to feel. But, when the poem was reread with sound and visuals, reading the poem seemed more suspenseful. During both times, it was understood that the poem was about blood and how it represents life. When the poem was playing with sound on, the poem played suspenseful music that sounded like an old heart rate monitor. This addition to the poem gave off a vibe that the poem is weirder than it actually is as the poem already has some odd descriptive imagery within the text, but the feeling is intensified after sound has been added. Looking at the beginning of the poem, …show more content…
Although the story seems incomplete and confusing as the poet does not tell us everything, the poem still consists of a beginning to describe the childhood, a climax when the audio intensified at the line when there was no decision, and a conclusion to state a claim. But in another perspective, “Red Lily” is not necessarily literature because literature usually consists of text only. The entire “Red Lily” poem online is in a format that seems like a movie trailer where there are scenes to help depict a story, audio to enhance the intended mood, as well as text to highlight some parts and leave cliffhangers for suspense, but because movie trailers aren’t literature, “Red Lily” doesn’t count as a work of literature. Despite whether it is a work of literature or not, “Red Lily” can qualify as a drama due to fact that dramas can be in many forms ranging from plays to movies to books. As for “Red Lily,” the poem is similar to a drama due to its trailer-like formatting including some intense and dramatic moments within the text as well as the timing of when the text shows up on the screen. As the text is playing across the screen, the timing it appears tends to be dragged out, and the effect of that is to cause suspense because the reader would want to know what the poem says next. The sound playing in

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