Short Story Rough Draft
Short Story Rough Draft
“Today is January 17, 1452.”, announced the king. “Our three kingdoms and my staff are here for one reason…” Princes Maddie was seated in her throne and her mind was wondering. “ … for my daughter’s marriage.” The king continued. Beautiful princes Maddie was only paying attention to Cedric, a place slave. Maddie and Cedric were silently mouthed words to each other. When Cedric mouthed a joke, Maddie accidentally let out a laugh. “Maddie!” Yelled her father. “Pay attention!” Her father’s raspy unsettled voice screeched. “Where was I, oh ya. Now, we will have a series of competitions for our young princes to compete in for my daughter, Maddie’s, hand in marriage. Let's introduce our princes.” The king’s voice …show more content…
“This is my first born son…” announced the king of the 2nd kingdom. “... his name is Hercules.” the king said in his old tired down voice. Hercules was blocked by a taller man and and when the man moved all eyes saw a small boy. He slowly started to move his bright orange hair out of his freckled face so his dark brown eyes could see. Skinny enough to have his bones seen through his skin. Maddie laughed at the fact that his name was the name of the strongest god.
“This young, handsome, man is my first born son named Forest” The king of the 3rd kingdom declared with a very straightforward voice. Everyone cheered in Forest’s excellents. Admitting that Maddie did not like the king’s ignorance, Forest was very handsome. He was tall, about 6’3, and his eyes sparkled under the light of the crystal chandeliers. His brown hair did not block his pale, confident, face . He was very serious and it appeared that had no feelings.
“Now let's introduce my daughter, Maddie.” The crowed roared in excitement! Maddie was tall, 5’8, and was a good type of skinny. Her black hair draped all the way down to her waist, she had bright blue eyes that sparkled under any light and she had the perfect amount of freckles. Cedric came too Maddie’s side to assist her out of her throne. Maddie denied the help and got up herself. She came to the light of the floor and carefully examined both princes in
“Today is January 17, 1452.”, announced the king. “Our three kingdoms and my staff are here for one reason…” Princes Maddie was seated in her throne and her mind was wondering. “ … for my daughter’s marriage.” The king continued. Beautiful princes Maddie was only paying attention to Cedric, a place slave. Maddie and Cedric were silently mouthed words to each other. When Cedric mouthed a joke, Maddie accidentally let out a laugh. “Maddie!” Yelled her father. “Pay attention!” Her father’s raspy unsettled voice screeched. “Where was I, oh ya. Now, we will have a series of competitions for our young princes to compete in for my daughter, Maddie’s, hand in marriage. Let's introduce our princes.” The king’s voice …show more content…
“This is my first born son…” announced the king of the 2nd kingdom. “... his name is Hercules.” the king said in his old tired down voice. Hercules was blocked by a taller man and and when the man moved all eyes saw a small boy. He slowly started to move his bright orange hair out of his freckled face so his dark brown eyes could see. Skinny enough to have his bones seen through his skin. Maddie laughed at the fact that his name was the name of the strongest god.
“This young, handsome, man is my first born son named Forest” The king of the 3rd kingdom declared with a very straightforward voice. Everyone cheered in Forest’s excellents. Admitting that Maddie did not like the king’s ignorance, Forest was very handsome. He was tall, about 6’3, and his eyes sparkled under the light of the crystal chandeliers. His brown hair did not block his pale, confident, face . He was very serious and it appeared that had no feelings.
“Now let's introduce my daughter, Maddie.” The crowed roared in excitement! Maddie was tall, 5’8, and was a good type of skinny. Her black hair draped all the way down to her waist, she had bright blue eyes that sparkled under any light and she had the perfect amount of freckles. Cedric came too Maddie’s side to assist her out of her throne. Maddie denied the help and got up herself. She came to the light of the floor and carefully examined both princes in