The problem could grow worse because the narrator already doesn’t like the girl with the red hair for no reason at all. In paragraph two sentence two the narrator says “But I hate ‘em just the same, mostly ‘cause that girl with the red hair and grey eyes looks like the girl Raheem once left me for.” If this problem gets bigger the story would be more interesting. The story is very good. It gives the readers an idea of what some girls are capable of doing for a boy. “I’ll do your homework, wash your clothes, lend you money, anything… Just keep on being my boo.” The narrator just wants to be with her boyfriend and will do anything for this to be possible. Overall this is an interesting story about the struggles of a girl with her relationship. It will keep readers on the edge of their seats, wanting to know more about what will happen to the characters throughout the
The problem could grow worse because the narrator already doesn’t like the girl with the red hair for no reason at all. In paragraph two sentence two the narrator says “But I hate ‘em just the same, mostly ‘cause that girl with the red hair and grey eyes looks like the girl Raheem once left me for.” If this problem gets bigger the story would be more interesting. The story is very good. It gives the readers an idea of what some girls are capable of doing for a boy. “I’ll do your homework, wash your clothes, lend you money, anything… Just keep on being my boo.” The narrator just wants to be with her boyfriend and will do anything for this to be possible. Overall this is an interesting story about the struggles of a girl with her relationship. It will keep readers on the edge of their seats, wanting to know more about what will happen to the characters throughout the