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Soccer: A Fictional Narrative
Today is a big day. It's the tryouts for soccer. Zach and I have practiced all summer for this day. Zach’s my best friend. It seems uncanny that a guy and a girl would be best friends, but it’s not. People would say “Oh, are you two boyfriend and girlfriend?” or something to that effect, but we’re not. I don’t have any desire to date him and I believe he has no desire to date me. At least not yet. “Hey Rosie Moore!” Zach said. I find it funny that he greets me by my full name, and I think he does too. “Hey Zach. You ready for today?” I said as we met up with each other and approached the field. “I better be. You and I have been practicing allllll summer,” he said as he rolled his dark brown eyes that flawlessly matched his hair. “Well, let's go.”

We both met up with the coach to
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We’ve won 6 games and only lost 1. Zach and I haven’t talked very much. He’s been looking glum recently, and I know it’s because of me. I feel so bad about this whole situation, and I’m not sure what to do about it.
Fiona and I have been getting closer. It’s sort of bitter sweet, though. I’m going to try my best to break the ice between Zach and I.
I went up to him today and asked how he’s been. He gave me a short answer, something like, “Yeah I’m doing alright. What about you.” That wasn’t a good sign.
Every day after school I tried to talk to Zach like old times. Each day he got easier to talk to, so I was making some progress. Then, something peculiar happened. I got a new emotional attachment to Zach. I wanted to be with him all the time. I don’t know what this was about. I decided to tell Fiona.
“Hey Fiona, I have this, like, I get this,... HOw do I explain? It’s about Zach. Every time I see him, I know I want to talk to him. I want to be by his side at all times. What do you think is going on?”
“I’m going to be honest, Rose. I think you like him, too. Maybe you should tell him these feelings you have.”
I took her advice,

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