The general argument made by John McWhorter in “Why ‘Redskins’ Is a Bad Word” is that not every thing you say about race is offensive but you should be careful. He states, “It may not be mean to tell someone their skin happens to be reddish. But it’s mean to call someone a Redskin (6)” This shows that he doesn’t believe that every thing referred to the color of your skin is “racist” but a slur is. McWhorter also believes that there are better alternatives from words like Redskin. He shows us “ ‘crippled’ had a less neutral connotation after a while, upon ‘handicap’ was a fine substitute (6)” This shows us that he thinks that there can be healthier substitutes than Redskins. I think Mr. McWhorter’s thought process isn’t logical at times and…
In the essay, Against School, John Taylor Gatto, expresses his strong belief in middle diction of how students in the typical public schooling system are conformed to low-standard education in order to benefit the society much more than the student themselves; causing schooling to be unnecessary as opposed to education . He believes that children and teachers are caught in extreme boredom as a result of repeated material. This boredom also causes a lack of maturity and independence in the students. Gatto wrote this essay in 2003 which appeared in Harper’s magazine. He gathered these observations during his 30 years of teaching in the best and worst schools of New York City. In 1991, he was named the New York City Teacher of the Year and later on New York State Teacher of the Year. He has written many publications on his experience with being an educator including Dumbing Us Down: The Hidden Curriculum of Compulsory Schooling (1992) and The Underground History of American Education (2001). This essay was most likely written to inform any American reader (student, parent, and teacher) of the reality of our modern schooling, based on Gatto’s use of modes of development and formal diction.…
Charles Murray’s “Are Too Many People Going to College?” essay is adapted from his book published in 2008: Real Education: Four Simple Truths for Bringing America’s Schools Back to Reality. In this essay, Charles Murray aims to convince his readers that too many people are going to college, too many people whom do not have the proper core knowledge that is needed to succeed. Instead, many students get ahead of themselves and plan for an unforeseeable future, when they do not know if they are going to succeed in this higher level of education without that proper core knowledge or the proper linguistic ability. Charles Murray states his opinions in this persuasive essay by incorporating ideas of other works of writing by other people and by drawing the audiences’ attention through realistic situations. I will not be doing a critique, I will be analyzing his essay to see whether he used deductive reasoning or inductive reasoning.…
In the article, “Want to Get Into College? Learn to Fail”, Angel Perez argues that if students want to get into college they must learn to fail. Failure isn’t something that we want to happen. The way Perez perceived failure is that it’s a learning tool for the future. Seeing someone else fail can teach another of what not to do. Perez wants his readers to know failure isn’t the end but is the beginning of something…
In this article, “In praise of the ‘F’ word”, Marry Sherry makes the point that in order to help kids do their school work and get their education; they must be threatened with failing. Before she started teaching her class, she would blame the poor academic skills our kids have today on drugs, divorce and other impediments to concentration necessary for doing well in school. She had an experience with her sons grade 12 English teacher. The teacher told Marry that because her son was talking in class, she wasn’t going to move him since he was a senior but was going to flunk him. At first she was a little put off by the fact that the teacher was going to take sure a drastic measure, but after a moment of thinking she realized that the teacher was making a reasonable decision. Marry goes on to talk about passing students who haven’t mastered school work cheat themselves, as well as their future employers who expect them to have those basic skills from high school. Their excuse for not having those skills is that kids can’t learn if they come from bad environments, but really the reason is that kids don’t put the right amount of school work into their lives as they should. Students that attend night classes are more determined to get their education and they make it their number one priority. Marry really believes in using flunking to help motivate kids to work harder because passing kids who aren’t actually doing the work are just going to suffer in the long run.…
Shannon Nichols “Proficiency”, describes her own struggle in taking a proficiency test that’s given by her high school. This specific test is considered a college based test that requires a passing score to be able to graduate high school. Shannon takes the test two time her ninth-grade year and one time her twelfth-grade year. She fails the first two attempts which makes her very uneasy and disappointed. Luckily, she passed the twelfth-year test but the psychological damage had already been done. She begins to doubt herself and her ability to write which puts the idea of deterrents in education in the readers mind. When people set themselves on a path towards education, there may be obstacles that seem unattainable. Unfortunately, depending on the mind of the individual, failing tests, low self-esteem, losing hope, and the loss of satisfaction while writing can become deterrents to attaining an education.…
This article uses logical rhetoric with many concrete details and statistics about writing problems with American high School students, and how the teachers at Dorp High School were able to overcome the issue. The author doesn’t just write about education issues; he visited Dorp High school and interviewed both teachers and students to…
2. Herbert blames parents, students, the educational establishment, government leaders, and the news media for the decline in the college degree holders. This quote “A society that closes its eyes to the most important issues of the day, that often holds intellectual achievement in contempt, that is more interested in hip-hop and Lady Gaga than educating its young is all but guaranteed to spiral into a decline.” best illustrates his criticism against the entrainment industry.…
One of the biggest problems with Mr. Moore’s essay is that he doesn’t have a clearly defined purpose. He has an opinion, no doubt, but the purpose of the essay is somewhat unclear. Throughout the essay, it seems as if Mr. Moore is trying to educate the reader about the problems of the American education system and who is to blame for those problems. But then near the end of the essay, Mr. Moore addresses high school students and provides specific direction on what they can do to “stir it up”. While this section is humorous, it doesn’t seem to go along with the essay and is not a good enough ending to tie everything together.…
High schools all over the United States of America allow teenages to continue moving up when they are not ready. This problem may have even been experienced by many different readers. In an essay, called “In Praise of the F Word” by Mary Sherry, the author tells the readers about the struggles of students who just barely pass, and students who are being cheated by the educational system. Have most people in American society been cheated by the educational system?…
The author is making a joke out of how if you drop out of high school that they will become unemployed and the school system is not preparing them for the realities. A clue I recognized for this is when they quoted Margaret Spellings who said “ easy grading encourages students to be sloppy and late handing in homework- a skill that makes future deadbeats very competitive in stone walling landlords and bill collectors” this emphasizes the mockery of the school systems.…
In what ways does this essay point out the education system’s effect on teachers as well as students?…
In Mary Sherry’s essay, “In Praise of the F Word,” the author encourages all parents and teachers to use failure as a form of encouragement. Sherry would like for them to use it as a way to motivate students to do better and want more when it comes to their education. What Sherry believes in is that the threat of flunking is a “positive teaching tool” (566).…
Tommy Raskin in Cheating Students (2013) asserts that our schools fail the humanistic vision of education. Tommy supports this assertion by reviewing the 2010 study conducted by Josephson Institute of Ethics that found 59 percent of high school students had cheated on a test in the past year, and over 33 percent had cheated more than twice. Not only does Tommy point out the problem of students cheating, and the pressure that is put on the students to memorize in order to succeed, but he asserts the problem that schools have turned what should be a shared learning endeavor into a ruthless competition. The article “Creative…motivated’ and fired”, found on page 24, where a fifth grade teacher was dismissed because of the highly unusual number of wrong answers that were corrected, is a perfect example of this competition that has become a crisis. The writer concludes that cheating has brought the economy to near ruins, and that the nature of schooling must be altered to make true learning the number one priority. The writer establishes a direct tone to convince his audience of educators that it is vital for humanists to play a leading role in reforming competition based grading that takes the joy out of learning, because it is humanistic values that are at stake in the cheating crisis.…
Sherry shares her thoughts in this essay to inform readers of how important knowledge really is in life. I believe her intended audience is directed towards students, parents, and educators. The article is directly stated in order for the audience to comprehend and grasp her intended argument. Sherry explains her first-hand experience with students that slide by in high school, and elaborates on the benefits of flunking kids that do not put forth any effort. I believe she is…