The first was 19-year-old woman who was scavenging for plastic in the garbage dump. “I’d love tom get a job in a factory” she said, “at least that work is in the shade. Here is where it’s hot.” (paragraph6, pg110). This woman testimony created effective evidence and clearly show that sweatshop job is positive and alternative for a better life. Kristof uses figurative language like metaphors: “It’s a mountain of festering refuse,” (paragraph 2, pg109), which translates to piles of rotting wastes. Also, “the miasma of toxic stink…” (Paragraph3, pg. 109), which describes the harmful vapors from the decomposing garbage. He continues using “…toxic stink leaves you gasping, breezes batter you with filth, and even the rats look forlorn.” (paragraph 3, pg. 109), which is an example of alliteration. Then, Kristof uses rhetorical questions such as in paragraph nine, “But would you want to work in a sweatshop?” Finally, Kristof is comparing poverty to a disease, and sweatshops to a symptom of that disease by the use of a metaphor; when he is saying: “Sweatshops are only a symptom of poverty, not a cause. “These visuals statements help Kristof convince his readers that sweatshops are a better option, a way out of …show more content…
His introduction is full of emotionally stories of how children were brutally injured because they had to sift through garbage in hope of recovering enough plastic to equate to a pound. Kristof notes: “the miasma of toxic…searching for old plastic cups that recyclers will buy for five cents a pound (paragraph3, pg109). Adding to this idea, another feeling Kristoff reinforces with his concept of fairness is the statement from 13 year- old Neuo Chanthou, who earns a bit less than 1$ a day scavenging in the dump. She’s wearing a “Playboy” shirt and hat that she found amid the filth, and she worries about her sister, who lost part of her hand when a garbage truck ran over her. (paragraph116, pg111). “It’s dirty, hot, and smelly here,” she said wistfully.” A factory is better.” All of these emotions convince the readers to sympathize to sympathize to those families who takes sweatshops as a positive