In the article “The right to bathe” starts off with an amazing hook using pathos. She instantly gets the audience's attention emotionally, talking about what people first think about when they think of blue spaces. She then goes on to tell the audience what her experiences have been in many different settings. For example, she talks about a day at the beach, finding seashells, getting past the breakers or even the sound of the …show more content…
Loads of people globally are impacted daily by anxiety, depression, psychosis and many more life-altering health challenges. A vast variety of cities and communities have raised their concerns over the matter and wonder if collective hydrotherapy could help. Recently, evidence has shown that immersion in water both cold and hot can improve your blood flow, give pain reduction and can have physical effects like reduced stress. Even being near water can improve your nervous system. This led researchers to study the therapeutic benefits of water to see how it impacts your mental health. Not long after, they found that it seemed to ease your mental health. A researcher named Lora Fleming said that having a clean waterfront at our disposal is good, especially when they are cheap. Many places are most often ignored when it comes to public health, and many large cities built near these are treated as commercial resources. Although the logos were good it wasn't excellent, in the areas where she stated things like recent scientific research, she doesn't consistently provide specifics about her stance. This one thing compromises the logos which also will influence her ethos which makes her less