The setting of the story starts off in a post war period. Everything known to mankind is gone. All that was left from the Great War known to the next generations was that the people before them died off because the gods were not pleased. This setting is very good because it gets right to the point and tells the reader what happened in the past and takes the reader all the way to the present
day. This gives the story a real effect.
The story has an effective rising action. The main character John starts off as a boy and with his father goes to ancient houses called dead houses where they find metal and pray. When John touched the metal, he knew he was called to be a priest. He goes to the place of the gods thinking he would die, and he didn't. On his way he battled a jaguar, fought a river, and just missed being attacked by wild dogs. This is a very good rising action. It takes the reader in his/her imagination and they can see all these things happening.
One more thing this story has is action. Right from the start the story takes the reader by surprise. John goes into the place of the gods at the end of the story and finds a man who has been dead for some time. It tells the reader that there were no gods and that place of the gods was nothing more than an ancient civilization. This is good because it draws the reader to want to read more and more as each page goes by.
This story has a good setting, rising action, and is full of action. It grabs the reader's attention from the very start. Which makes this a good story to read. The setting is very good because it gets right to the point. The rising action is very good because you can see what is really happening in the story with your imagination. The action is very good it takes to into the conflicts of John and you want to just keep reading more and more. Any body that likes short stories with a lot of conflicts would love this story.