Summer Solstice Sharon Old Analysis

I wrote my essay one over the poem Summer Solstice, New York by Sharon Olds. It is poem in which author explains about longest summer day June 22. I read this poem first time, and it was great experience. Throughout my essay I made a lot mistakes as grammatical errors and most of the sentences doesn’t make sense. We were told to write about an argument essay about this poem. I mostly explained the poem instead of putting clear claim. After receiving my grades I read through it again and I found a lot mistakes. Moreover, my citations were also wrong, even though I spend days to write this paper. But there are many mistakes, I am pleased that we got another chance to write it again and review our mistakes. I have learned a lot after receiving