The Inuit, Haida, Iroquois, And Sioux
Hook: Although, it has become common to refer to the Inuit as Eskimos, this is not their preferred name, nor does it have anything to do with their culture heritage.
Background Info: Some background info for my hook is that it goes with my thesis because it works with my hook and it has a lot of details in my hook.
Thesis: This essay is about the Inuit, Haida, Iroquois, and Sioux. It will tell you about what happened in all 4 places.
Body Paragraph 1 (Alike)
Topic Sentence: This is going to be about all 4 places and it is going to talk about what happens in all 4 places back then.
Evidence 1: The Inuit is a really a big place and it has a lot of interesting things there.
Explain: The Inuit is big because there are a lot of things that …show more content…
Body Paragraph 3-Haida Differences
Topic Sentence: The Haida is a small place because it doesn’t have that many resources to use to get things that you need.
Evidence 1: Haida is a small place because of all the stuff that is going on and changing.
Explain: Haida is like this because things there are not like things that we have here.
Evidence 2: Haida has very little things there because they didn’t have money back then, they would have to make them.
Explain: They didn’t have much of anything because back then every body there was poor with no money.
Evidence 3: People there suffered for food, money, and clothes ans they had to go through a lot things.
Explain: They never got to have money just once because there wasn’t a lot of money for poor people.
Connect to topic sentence: It will connect to the topic sentence because Haida was small and very poor back then.
Body Paragraph-Sioux Difference
Topic Sentence: Sioux was a smaller place because there wasn’t a lot of things to do and a lot of people were poor and didn’t have a home or money.
Evidence 1: People back then were really poor because of how it was back
Background Info: Some background info for my hook is that it goes with my thesis because it works with my hook and it has a lot of details in my hook.
Thesis: This essay is about the Inuit, Haida, Iroquois, and Sioux. It will tell you about what happened in all 4 places.
Body Paragraph 1 (Alike)
Topic Sentence: This is going to be about all 4 places and it is going to talk about what happens in all 4 places back then.
Evidence 1: The Inuit is a really a big place and it has a lot of interesting things there.
Explain: The Inuit is big because there are a lot of things that …show more content…
Body Paragraph 3-Haida Differences
Topic Sentence: The Haida is a small place because it doesn’t have that many resources to use to get things that you need.
Evidence 1: Haida is a small place because of all the stuff that is going on and changing.
Explain: Haida is like this because things there are not like things that we have here.
Evidence 2: Haida has very little things there because they didn’t have money back then, they would have to make them.
Explain: They didn’t have much of anything because back then every body there was poor with no money.
Evidence 3: People there suffered for food, money, and clothes ans they had to go through a lot things.
Explain: They never got to have money just once because there wasn’t a lot of money for poor people.
Connect to topic sentence: It will connect to the topic sentence because Haida was small and very poor back then.
Body Paragraph-Sioux Difference
Topic Sentence: Sioux was a smaller place because there wasn’t a lot of things to do and a lot of people were poor and didn’t have a home or money.
Evidence 1: People back then were really poor because of how it was back