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The Legend Of Braileigh: Alpaca Dancer
On a warm April day, April the 1st to be exact something wonderful happened. It was the birth of an amazing, adorable, baby alpaca. Her name was Braileigh, she was wonderful in every way with bright white as snow fur and a pink rosy nose. Braileigh’s parents disappeared when she was only 6 weeks old, she was left all alone in this place she was newly introduced to and that was so huge compared to her. Braileigh spent one whole year wandering from town to town all by herself. She would have to eat whatever she could find to survive the battle she was facing and hope to see a light at the tunnel. Living in a town close by was this 6 year old little girl named Ellie with braided brown pigtails that laid gracefully on her shoulders. Ellie was …show more content…
Today was the alpaca showcase. Braileigh was contestant #6 and she was the only alpaca dancer except for one other alpaca named May Belle. May Belle was contestant #5 and she was also a really good dancer and it intimidated Braileigh. Braileigh, waiting her turn in line was kind of worried on how there was another dancer in the contest now. She decided she would go talk to May Belle and see if she was as worried as she was. Walking over to May Belle she instantly regretted it, “Hello...” said Braileigh “are you excited for your performance?”. May Belle turned around with an unpleasant look on her face and responds “Oh you must be my rival, if you even want to call it that.”. Braileigh still with a smile on her face responds “Yes, I am your rival and I wish you the best of luck!”. “Welcome to the stage, May Belle!” said the announcer. May Belle’s performance went perfectly until the music stopped and she forgot her counts. May Belle stopped dancing with a horrified look on her face and ran off the stage crying. Braileigh ran after her even after the rude comment May Belle said to her, she knew it was the right thing to do. May Belle saw Braileigh coming towards her and said “Stop! I don't feel like dealing with you right now!”. Braileigh began to reason with her and said “May Belle it’s not the worst thing in the world you will be okay. Did you see the judges?” May Belle responded in a depressed, soft no. “All
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