No characters undergo development or sufficiently surprise the readers, which made the story a little dull
There was no pacing in the story, which allowed the readers to lose interest.
Pacing builds tension and emphasizes important events, making it clear that there is a climax approaching. However, due to the lack of pacing, the tension was neither increasing or decreasing, making the reader unaware of when the climax occurred.
● Development of the plot and characters follow the plot graph
● Development of the lense is clear and consistent
Effectively portrayed the relationship between women and men during the time period
Male/female roles were clearly defined
Highlighted the issue of women being oppressed by economics and social views
● The stylistic choices made in the writing and reading of the …show more content…
The short story showed an excellent understanding of the feminist lens, which was appropriately done by setting the story after World War 1.
Very good degree of accuracy of what occurred after WW1, which made it easy to appropriately highlight the inequalities between the