Literary/non-literary language
Images (five)
Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Apostrophe
Repetition and Parallelism
Hyperbole
Exaggeration
Antithesis
Oxymoron
Paradox
Allusion
Connotation
Sound Devices:
Internal rhyme
End rhyme
Eye rhyme
Assonance
Consonance
Alliteration
Onomatopoeia
Setting
Tone
Mood
Attitude
Samples of Students’ writing in the Midterms
a. And I saw the flash of a white throat, And a double row of white teeth, And eyes of metallic grey, Hard and narrow and slit
Very poor:
In this poem lines bears an images of visual image. Cause this poems lines are describing about appeals to the sight of image. In literary terms the glossary of visual image is describing. If any poem bore a image of look at which is visual image. In literary terms it bear an image of sight. We know about five images. Such as visual, auditory, gustatory, olfactory and tectile. In this poems lines about appeals to the sight. In this poem, white throat and white teeth normally is a visual thing (???). The poet of this poem describing it clearly. The eyes of metallic grey hard or narrow it’s identified by looking. So, we tell the image of this poem is visual.
Poor:
The Quotation, wholly, contains an image of sight that is supposed to be visual image. The speaker here observes one’s facial objectivities creating this dominating imagery. Here might be contained another image that’s supposed to be the sense of texture. Here the eyes of addressee are supposed to be hard as metal. So, it might be an tactile image.
Moderately ok:
This is an example of visual image. Visual image is one kind of image that appeals to the sense of sight. From the example given, we get a picture in our mind of a white throat, double row of white teeth, and eyes of metallic grey. By combining all these descriptions, we can get a visual image.
Good:
In these lines we find examples of visual