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The Raven Alternate Ending
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Raven opened the door to her room, it was already near midnight. She kept the lights off in her room, pulling off her sweater and leaving the door open behind her. Who cared who saw her? Saw them. She walked over to her mirror and fought off a childish smirk. And if anyone did see, they would get the show of their lives.
The clock read 12:02, and Raven stripped off her shirt, and then her skirt. Her tights and shoes following close behind. She considered whether or not to leave her bra and underwear on when a meek voice came from the doorway.
"Raven?" she asked, looking into the dark bedroom nervously. Raven grinned outwardly and kicked her clothes toward the dresser. She walked to the doorway and took the girl's hand, leading her
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The girl took a deep breath and looked like she was about to say no. Raven moved her head close to the girl's ear again and whispered, "From this point on, I don't take no for an answer."
The girl looked at Raven for a moment before asking, quietly, "Kiss me again?"
"Strip for me," was Raven's response.
The girl took a step back from Raven, but Raven took a step forward. "I want to feel every piece of clothing fall."
The girl nodded and started unbuttoning her jeans, her breathing became ragged as she started to pull them down. Raven was standing close enough that she felt the rough fabric brush her legs as they came down between them. The girl kicked out of the jeans and started on her underwear but Raven stopped her.
"I have an idea," Raven said taking one of the girl's hands.
The girl looked scared. "Where are we going?" She asked.
Raven gave her a coy smile. "To the living room," she said.
The girl's eyes widened. "But everyone will see us there," she hissed, trying to pull away from Raven's
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Ashley took a deep breath. "They wouldn't be angry?" she asked, not believing it.
"If we're lucky, they'll ask us to join," Raven said, moving to stand behind Ashley. "Here's what we'll do. I'm going to play a game with you, and when you find something you like you can direct my hands where to go. Now, put your fingers over mine," Raven directed, cuddling up behind Ashley and placing one hand on her hip and another just inside the front of her panties.
Ashley gasped at the cool touch of Raven's hand. She did as Raven directed and gently put her fingers inside her panties, her hands over Raven's. Raven moved her fingers down, curling down into the curve of Ashley's crotch. Ashley's breathing quickened when she felt fingers glide gently over her clit.
"Don't be afraid to make noise," Raven whispered to her, now kissing the back of her neck. Ashley moved her fingers so that they were in control of Raven's. She rubbed Raven's fingers over her clit again and gasped aloud, loud enough that Skylar and Jessie broke apart from each other and wondered what the noise was.
"Sky, did you hear that?" Jessie asked, pushing away from Skylar's

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