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I took deep breaths and tried to relax my muscles but the more I tried the more I tried the more I tensed up. How could I not be scared? I mean, after all in just a few minutes I would be doing something that some dare not to do, well, actually for me it's not that crazy, but I was still so scared. If you haven't found out the thing I am talking about, the thing I am stressing about is a rollercoaster. But not just any rollercoaster, a seven-looping, twisting turning roller coaster. It is called Bizarro. I had been on just about all the other roller coasters at the park, but not bizarro! It scared me too much! I was at the park with my two friends, Shayne and Kyleigh. “Come on guys, it really isn’t that scary!” Shayne called out. “Easy …show more content…

But I was so busy worrying I didn’t even realize. All of a sudden I started to feel queasy, and it felt like my stomach was doing seven loops! But when I looked over at Kyleigh, I had never seen a more petrified, worried person in my life! Her hands shaking she managed to say, “Can we please, please, please, go on a different ride!” Just then we had just made our way to first online, “Ky, we have been waiting in line for like a half hour, we can't go back now!” Shayne replied to her. I was on Kyleigh's side, scared and all, but after all, we had been waiting in line for what seemed like an hour so I wasn't turning back. I looked over and saw a cart rush into the station like a mad bull charging at a scrawny old man, and before I knew it our gate bars flung open immediately and I felt like it wanted to say to me, “Ready for this scary ride that will traumatize you forever?”. “Oh boy, here we go!” I said in horror. The worker buckled us into the seats and before I or Kyleigh could have second thoughts we were off! It felt like a spaceship that had me in it, blasting off to a new world, but that idea died as soon as we whipped into our first

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