Throughout the story, Capote uses alliteration to keep the reader's attention directed towards the condition of the town. Using word groups to describe the town such as: “haphazard hamlet”,”stucco structure”, and the streets as “unnamed, unshaded and unpaved” provides
the reader with a strategy that appeals to the eye. The descriptive words used in this alliteration expresses how unorganized, boring, and rural the town is and provides the reader with examples that are not as easily forgotten. When looking at the text the words beginning with the same letters catch your eye first therefore sticking in your mind above other strategies that may appear more meaningless to the reader.
In this story, Capote uses an abundance of imagery. His imagery allows the reader to see the buildings as if they were walking down the street among all the run down businesses and houses. The sentence, “The land is flat, and the views are awesomely extensive; horses, herds of cattle, a white cluster of grain…”, provides a great example of imagery that paints a picture of their town scenery. This vivid reference will follow you through the story keeping the look of the town fresh in your mind causing the story to be more enjoyable to the reader.