The point of any speech is to connect with an audience (and persuade them) on a far deeper level than any written form can provide. That connection may be through empathy, or through enthusiasm. An audience can relate to a strong speaker and a well written speech, and can be persuaded into seeing and understanding different points of view. Unfortunately not all speech writers have the insight or skill to do this, and it is obvious not only in the language and tone (formal, indifferent) but in the construction of the text.An example of this would be (former governor general of Australia) Sir William Deane’s speech “On the Occasion of an Ecumenical Service for the Victims of the
Canyoning Tragedy” 1999, of which even the title feels impersonal and somewhat cold. The whole of the speech is very formal, with strong political undertones and all round lack of sincerity. Of all the prescribed texts, I found the Governor General’s speech the most lacking in intellectual appeal and the most insincere, especially when compared to Keating’s balanced and heartwarming speech. considering that both speeches were written to be presented at a funeral service, and in Deane’s case, for 21 young people. a better speaker on the other hand is able to connect with the audience, no one has to be passionate or even interested in their subject as long as they understand the audience’s perspective, the situation