Once Kara was diagnosed with an aggressive lymphoma, she had to go through chemotherapy. The chemotherapy caused her to lose her long and beautiful hair. Her new appearance frightened her children. Also they did not want her to come visit their school. Kara was embarrassed as well and kept up a picture of herself before the chemotherapy to ease her anger and embarrassment. Shipler adds even more emotional appeal by stating: “ In her eyes, the camera had caught a hint of laughter then. Now, against her gaunt face, they were fiercely bright, pleading, proud.” (177). This paragraph makes the readers feel alarmed, angry, and pity. The readers feel alarmed and slightly angry because the children that love Kara so greatly do not even want her to be seen at their school. The reader will also feel pity for Kara because after all she has gone through, her kids end up flinching at the sight of her. Shipler uses emotions very well in this paragraph to make it more
Once Kara was diagnosed with an aggressive lymphoma, she had to go through chemotherapy. The chemotherapy caused her to lose her long and beautiful hair. Her new appearance frightened her children. Also they did not want her to come visit their school. Kara was embarrassed as well and kept up a picture of herself before the chemotherapy to ease her anger and embarrassment. Shipler adds even more emotional appeal by stating: “ In her eyes, the camera had caught a hint of laughter then. Now, against her gaunt face, they were fiercely bright, pleading, proud.” (177). This paragraph makes the readers feel alarmed, angry, and pity. The readers feel alarmed and slightly angry because the children that love Kara so greatly do not even want her to be seen at their school. The reader will also feel pity for Kara because after all she has gone through, her kids end up flinching at the sight of her. Shipler uses emotions very well in this paragraph to make it more