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Tom Brennan Narrative
I am Tom Brennan, it has been 10 years since accident happened. My older brother Daniel has been released from prison 5 years ago. First five years after accident, my family decide to move to somewhere else. My sister and I found a school, we made lots of new friends. My mother was in tears all days, we persuaded her some days, about one year later, she pull up her slacks. That day was cloudy. It may rain every minute. I went with my parents to take my brother Daniel home. He has changed. His face is full of whiskers, expression in his eyes is calm. Once he step out of the prison, he couldn’t wait to embrace our mother and father. Of course, he embraced me too. On the way home, he told us how he spent these years. No good no bad, peaceful …show more content…
He said: “Daniel made a super big mistake, but I don’t blame on him, because he is my son.” My father support the whole family while Daniel went into the prison. He is a great man. About my mother, she is so sad when accident happened, she don’t understand why Daniel did that, we tried a lot on persuading her. Many years later, Daniel come back, mother became more and more happier. Now she is helping father looking after farms. Thanks to Daniel, he helped a lot to develop our family, more and more relatives come to visit us every year, like aunt and uncle, they come to our house every month. Our neighbours often come to chat. We become rich. Everything goes better because of Daniel. About my sister and myself we have good friends around us. Daniel, he is a trader, that’s why he sent so much money every year. We are a lovely family now. The accident changed my life, also Daniel and my family’s. There are some setbacks in our lifes, every setback is a chance, a chance to go ahead or step back. Daniel did it, he helped a lot in developing family, and my father and mother, they were trying their best to changing our family to be better. This is the power of family and

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