Transferring to ____________ would be the key that allows me to
further advance my career goals in _____. I am pursuing these majors because I wake up to so many issues that too many people face. I grew up in a town where opportunity was limited and the cycle of poverty shackled so many people and diminished their potential. (insert more personal stuff here) Thus, it is crucial for people in my generation to not only acknowledge the problems but also make it a mission to resolve them.
Studying at ____ would provide me the access to the tools that are necessary to become successful and help solve the problems in my neighborhood. It will also help me identify my weaknesses and build on my strengths so that I can become the best version of myself. I will also be surrounded with other students who are passionate and diverse in their thoughts and experiences. Most importantly, I want nothing more than to leave a legacy of my own that inspires young girls to see beyond their neighborhood fences and pursuing studies at ____ would be the best place for me to achieve this goal.