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Final My tribute speech and informative speech were similar with Angela’s comments about reading off note cards and I clearly see that in both speeches. I can see in both my speeches that I’m very nervous and need to just take deep breaths after each point. I’m rarely looking at my audience in both speeches. I have no hand gestures in either of my speeches which is something I need to work on. I needed to practice both speeches a lot more then I had done. My peer comments on having nice clear points are the same on both speeches. The peer comments also said I need to work on eye contact and gestures on both speeches. My tribute speech was a lot less organized than my Informative speech at 1:10 in my tribute speech I can see myself shuffling
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