Utoya Lost
Utoya Lost
It was a quiet summer's day on the Island of Utoya, where each year, hundreds of youngsters would come together and spend a week away from their families, to do projects, activities and other fun things. Little did they know, that many would never see their families again...
"Just another peaceful afternoon" Is what they told themselves as they all gathered around for the daily assembly. Friends side by side, smiles and giggles on every face, not only was the atmopsphere lively, so was the scenery.
Beautiful forests surrounded the camp, the trees were tall and slender, quiet a task to climb. As for the lakeside, a clear smooth water, but vast and deep.
The scenery may have been magnificent, but not for long, soon the water would turn red, and the trees... too high to climb.
A.R.H
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It was a quiet summer's day on the Island of Utoya, where each year, hundreds of youngsters would come together and spend a week away from their families, to do projects, activities and other fun things. Little did they know, that many would never see their families again...
"Just another peaceful afternoon" Is what they told themselves as they all gathered around for the daily assembly. Friends side by side, smiles and giggles on every face, not only was the atmopsphere lively, so was the scenery.
Beautiful forests surrounded the camp, the trees were tall and slender, quiet a task to climb. As for the lakeside, a clear smooth water, but vast and deep.
The scenery may have been magnificent, but not for long, soon the water would turn red, and the trees... too high to climb.
A.R.H
(this website said 'the essay is too short' although it may be short, to make it longer would take the style, the flow out of it. Why put a world limit on sources of inspiration? If I where to put on a long essay, would you tell me to shorten it? Just leave it be, it's a short little essay and I think it's good. )
(it's still too short)
(even with that extra little description at the end?)
(Please allow me to submit this)
(I'm gonna continue)
(untill you let me)
(this is using up a lot of space, yet it's still too short?)
(What exactly is too short for you? )