Why Chinese Mother Are Superior
Golsom Azim
Ms: - Rebecca
Language and composition
First Draft of Narrative Essay
Going to Marriage Party
I
was nine years old, very noisy and did not pay attention to anyone even my parents. Whatever I wanted the most I just did so. One day while I was playing with my dolls, I overheard that my parents were talking together about going to a marriage party, the marriage party related to one of my mother’s relative, my mother was saying that “don’t inform the children because the house is so far and if we take them they will become tired and also let them to study their lessons. When I heard it I became very happy because on my childhood I really liked to participate in different kinds of parties, I just continued playing, When my mother prepared herself for going to the wedding, I went and asked: “Mother where are you going?” Because I was so obstinate my mother hid it from me and said “my dear daughter I am just going out for shopping.” but I knew that she is going to the wedding, I said: “No mother you are telling lie, due to going out why are you wearing such beautiful clothes?” my mother said nothing, just preparing herself. I screamed mother I know that you are going to the wedding; please I want to go as well. Please take me also but my mother did not look at me and went to find her sandal I just fallowed crying, she did not do anything because she knew that I am so stubborn and never listen to her, after a lot of crying she gave me one of my beautiful dresses and I got ready. On that day at ten o’clock my parents and I left home. Journey was really joyful for me because I never had long trip before, on the way my parents were talking with each other about the wedding but I did not hear them, I was just seeing out from the window of the car different things, like people were busy on their works and did different things and saw many beautiful trees and flowers and wondering
Ms: - Rebecca
Language and composition
First Draft of Narrative Essay
Going to Marriage Party
I
was nine years old, very noisy and did not pay attention to anyone even my parents. Whatever I wanted the most I just did so. One day while I was playing with my dolls, I overheard that my parents were talking together about going to a marriage party, the marriage party related to one of my mother’s relative, my mother was saying that “don’t inform the children because the house is so far and if we take them they will become tired and also let them to study their lessons. When I heard it I became very happy because on my childhood I really liked to participate in different kinds of parties, I just continued playing, When my mother prepared herself for going to the wedding, I went and asked: “Mother where are you going?” Because I was so obstinate my mother hid it from me and said “my dear daughter I am just going out for shopping.” but I knew that she is going to the wedding, I said: “No mother you are telling lie, due to going out why are you wearing such beautiful clothes?” my mother said nothing, just preparing herself. I screamed mother I know that you are going to the wedding; please I want to go as well. Please take me also but my mother did not look at me and went to find her sandal I just fallowed crying, she did not do anything because she knew that I am so stubborn and never listen to her, after a lot of crying she gave me one of my beautiful dresses and I got ready. On that day at ten o’clock my parents and I left home. Journey was really joyful for me because I never had long trip before, on the way my parents were talking with each other about the wedding but I did not hear them, I was just seeing out from the window of the car different things, like people were busy on their works and did different things and saw many beautiful trees and flowers and wondering