Why Teenagers Act Violently
WHY TEENAGERS ACT VIOLENTLY
INTRODUCTION
Thesis statement: The violence among teenagers occurred due to several factors such as having a history of being abused, violence in media and alcohol and drug use.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Topic sentence: Some teenagers have a history of being hurt or abused by someone.
Supporting detail 1: As a result, they tend to act violently as a form of revenge for what they have been through.
Example 1: Zahid in the story The Pencil was bullied and became a bully himself.
Supporting detail 2: Teenagers who are violently treated think it is okay for them to treat others the way they are treated.
Example 2: These teenagers settle their problems by using their fists rather than words and wisdom.
BODY PARAGRAPH 3
Topic sentence: Uncontrollable violence exposed in mass media causes violence among teenagers.
Supporting detail 1: Television shows extreme violence as a form of entertainment causes teenagers to feel the need to imitate the actions.
Example 1: The television broadcast WWE triggers the sense of hostility in the teenager resulting them to become violent.
Supporting detail 2: The Internet plays an important part in spreading violence among teenagers.
Example 2: YouTube is one of the famous video sites that offers all kinds of videos including the ones that shows violence.
BODY PARAGRAPH 4
Topic sentence: Alcohol and drug use contribute to violent actions.
Supporting detail 1: Teenagers tend to act violently under the influence of alcohol because at that time, they are not in their right mind.
Example 1: At parties, teenagers usually end up fighting because they have been drinking.
Supporting detail 2: Teenagers who involve in drugs would do anything to get money to buy drugs.
Example 2: Drug-addict teenagers are willing to harm the people around them for drugs.
CONCLUSION
Concluding sentence: Thus, everyone should take part by playing their role in order to help these troubled teenagers to overcome their
INTRODUCTION
Thesis statement: The violence among teenagers occurred due to several factors such as having a history of being abused, violence in media and alcohol and drug use.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Topic sentence: Some teenagers have a history of being hurt or abused by someone.
Supporting detail 1: As a result, they tend to act violently as a form of revenge for what they have been through.
Example 1: Zahid in the story The Pencil was bullied and became a bully himself.
Supporting detail 2: Teenagers who are violently treated think it is okay for them to treat others the way they are treated.
Example 2: These teenagers settle their problems by using their fists rather than words and wisdom.
BODY PARAGRAPH 3
Topic sentence: Uncontrollable violence exposed in mass media causes violence among teenagers.
Supporting detail 1: Television shows extreme violence as a form of entertainment causes teenagers to feel the need to imitate the actions.
Example 1: The television broadcast WWE triggers the sense of hostility in the teenager resulting them to become violent.
Supporting detail 2: The Internet plays an important part in spreading violence among teenagers.
Example 2: YouTube is one of the famous video sites that offers all kinds of videos including the ones that shows violence.
BODY PARAGRAPH 4
Topic sentence: Alcohol and drug use contribute to violent actions.
Supporting detail 1: Teenagers tend to act violently under the influence of alcohol because at that time, they are not in their right mind.
Example 1: At parties, teenagers usually end up fighting because they have been drinking.
Supporting detail 2: Teenagers who involve in drugs would do anything to get money to buy drugs.
Example 2: Drug-addict teenagers are willing to harm the people around them for drugs.
CONCLUSION
Concluding sentence: Thus, everyone should take part by playing their role in order to help these troubled teenagers to overcome their