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Write An Alternate Ending For Mary's Creature
Hooves clapped against the ground. Mary’s breath grew shallow as she forced herself to keep still and quiet. One misstep, one sharp intake of breath, and it would find her. This, she was certain of. The light radiating from the beast drew closer, forcing Mary’s lungs and body still. Then, as soon as it had appeared, it passed on. Mary didn’t dare move until she was absolutely certain it was gone. Samuel had been right after all. They were here, absolutely, irrefutably here, and they were very much real. Mary shuddered as she thought back to the creature’s appearance. She had only caught a glimpse before rushing for cover behind the abandoned doorway, but what she had seen was sure to stay with her. Sharp black horns had held a shining sphere
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