A Country's First Duty to Its Citizens Is to Protect Them. Therefore It Is Logical That Defence Should Take Up a Significant Proportion of the National Budget.
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"One solution to decline in moral values in today’s world would be for men and women to return to their traditional roles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" Roles of men and women are an important part contributing to moral values in the society. Many people claim that women’s participation in the workforce leads to moral decline in the community. However, I believe women going to work will have more more knowledge and create gender equality.
There are some reasons for thinking that moral values are tailing off due to the existence of females at work. First, without the care and supervision from women, their children easily involve in evils. Moreover, today’s women prone to be masculine, aggressive . Being concerned with economic gains and social status achievement, women grow more ambitions and change their behavior towards the unwanted side. As a result, the relationship between members in a family can be turn to be fragile, eroding the social value in the long term
However, are those argument totally true? I think women with their career can help not only themselves and their family but also the perception of sex equality. To start with, women working means they are equipped with knowledge and experience. So, their children can receive from them better vision and advice to persue higher education and have better lives. Further more, like any men, women have the right to follow their career and live a true life. In the past, there are many cases of men forcing their wives to stay at home. Even worse, such men attacked their wives without receiving charge from the judge. Today, thanks to the the participation of women in work, they have bigger
Here is another essay that i've done. could you give me some feedbacks if you have time ? thanks a lot. :D
"One solution to decline in moral values in today’s world would be for men and women to return to their traditional roles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" Roles of men and women are an important part contributing to moral values in the society. Many people claim that women’s participation in the workforce leads to moral decline in the community. However, I believe women going to work will have more more knowledge and create gender equality.
There are some reasons for thinking that moral values are tailing off due to the existence of females at work. First, without the care and supervision from women, their children easily involve in evils. Moreover, today’s women prone to be masculine, aggressive . Being concerned with economic gains and social status achievement, women grow more ambitions and change their behavior towards the unwanted side. As a result, the relationship between members in a family can be turn to be fragile, eroding the social value in the long term
However, are those argument totally true? I think women with their career can help not only themselves and their family but also the perception of sex equality. To start with, women working means they are equipped with knowledge and experience. So, their children can receive from them better vision and advice to persue higher education and have better lives. Further more, like any men, women have the right to follow their career and live a true life. In the past, there are many cases of men forcing their wives to stay at home. Even worse, such men attacked their wives without receiving charge from the judge. Today, thanks to the the participation of women in work, they have bigger