A place that I have always wanted to go but have never been to
A place that I have always wanted to go but have never been to is Peking University. It has always been a dream of mine of living here and getting me enlightened on my life. (我们tutor说dream这个词其实不怎么好，就中国人乱用。你可以改成goal或aim)(那个应该是me，不是myself)
Life in Peking University is consequential (这个小词儿太拽了，你确定它主要的常用的那个意思是你要表达的意思么？) and delightful. (这个地方把形容词变成名词就学术啦，就像of great delight)
First, I have an access to numerous learning resources: learned professors, a tons of books and documents, many of lectures for free, etc.
Second, its atmosphere gives me cultural identity. Peking University spans history in a way and it likes to hold on to its traditions and its character even though something in our life has been swept up in modernization.
Third, I also have many opportunities to relax myself. (原来的句子不是概括句，就把原来的变成第二句) For instance, there is a good place for me and my friends to go for rest and relaxation: Chang Chun gourmet Street, where I can take my mind off and have fun. We would head for some restaurant where we would choose our favorite dishes. My friends and I would like to eat slowly for the joy of sharing and of being together. Except that, we can also go to a Karaoke house. Singing with friends is more relaxing, especially when we doing that in an interesting way, like the competitive game where one group against another, or boys against girls.
Nevertheless there's still some time I feel the life is tiring. Actually (为什么要用actually呢？我觉得怎么有点儿多余。。。在我们这儿一个词就成逻辑问题了)I have lots of study assignments to accomplish, and also some tasks of the student union to finish. Anyway（该词超级
学术。。。我们presentation里面都不许用的呢。。。）, I can figure them out.
To conclude, I now live in Peking University and I like it very much not because it's the place where I can feel the heartbeat of Chinese culture, but because it offers me great opportunity to realize myself.(为什么不用not only…but also…呢？)
Life in Peking University is consequential (这个小词儿太拽了，你确定它主要的常用的那个意思是你要表达的意思么？) and delightful. (这个地方把形容词变成名词就学术啦，就像of great delight)
First, I have an access to numerous learning resources: learned professors, a tons of books and documents, many of lectures for free, etc.
Second, its atmosphere gives me cultural identity. Peking University spans history in a way and it likes to hold on to its traditions and its character even though something in our life has been swept up in modernization.
Third, I also have many opportunities to relax myself. (原来的句子不是概括句，就把原来的变成第二句) For instance, there is a good place for me and my friends to go for rest and relaxation: Chang Chun gourmet Street, where I can take my mind off and have fun. We would head for some restaurant where we would choose our favorite dishes. My friends and I would like to eat slowly for the joy of sharing and of being together. Except that, we can also go to a Karaoke house. Singing with friends is more relaxing, especially when we doing that in an interesting way, like the competitive game where one group against another, or boys against girls.
Nevertheless there's still some time I feel the life is tiring. Actually (为什么要用actually呢？我觉得怎么有点儿多余。。。在我们这儿一个词就成逻辑问题了)I have lots of study assignments to accomplish, and also some tasks of the student union to finish. Anyway（该词超级
学术。。。我们presentation里面都不许用的呢。。。）, I can figure them out.
To conclude, I now live in Peking University and I like it very much not because it's the place where I can feel the heartbeat of Chinese culture, but because it offers me great opportunity to realize myself.(为什么不用not only…but also…呢？)