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“I’m Working on My Charm” by Dorothy Allison “I’m Working on My Charm” written by Dorothy Allison is a story of a southern girl at a party consisting of Yankees. It brings her back to the time when she was sixteen and working at a counter with her mother. Her mother had taught her the tricks of being a well-tipped waitress while serving to a variety of customers. The waitresses each played a game where they would guess the tip their customer would give before ordering. Yankees were the most difficult customer, whom no one would bet on because they were inconsistent with their tips. The narrator soon learned to “work her charm” on the Yankees in order to please them. At the party, she continues to use her southern charm to win the people over. The central idea is that people judged by their stereotypes will conform to society to please others. The main character is the narrator who plays as a stereotypical southern girl. She puts on a sweet act for her customers to receive tips. “I just smiled my heartbreaker’s smile and got the man his sandwich,” the narrator stated when an old man left a five dollar bill. When serving to early morning tourists, she learned that “if you talked softly you never got less than a dollar.” The northerners fell for her charm in the work place. “We have so much to learn from you- gentility, you know, courtesy, manners, charm, all of that,” a friend of the director of the organization she now worked at, had told her. The narrator uses her stereotype as a way to please people and give them what they are asking for. Mabel, a friend of her mother’s and a coworker at the counter, played as a role model to the narrator. She taught her exactly how to work her charm for the customers. “Talk like you’re from Mississippi, and they’ll eat it up,” she’d tell her in order to handle the Yankees. Mabel knew exactly what to do and say for tips. She often puts aside her own self-worth to keep her customers satisfied. The main conflict in the

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