Personal Statement example

Being brought in a moderately educated family and background, albeit there have been efforts and attempts made in order to encourage me to be successful in academics, such efforts were taken for granted. However, things were changed when I did almost fail to satisfy the requirements for a stand in the science stream during my secondary period. As such, I believe that education does make a stark and huge difference although there is a possibility that working experiences could overturn such situation in this world. With efforts and hard work, I can feel that my self-conscious is at ease and satisfied.
Nevertheless, since after the moment I have started my CAL course, things are not similar compared to my high school period. With only hard work but without good analysis and critical evaluation, a desirable grade could not be achieved and this is mainly due to the differences of system of education. During my A-level course, I have suffered a great time in order to put myself in a place where I could comprehend the core subjects. Thus, these have taught me to study hard and smart.
Karl Marx’s views on various aspects of society have been one of my favourite reading materials. All societies are divided into social groups known as classes. Applying the class model of Karl Marx into the current world, such claims are succinctly clear in my country with all the injustices and corruptions which have occurred. I was once being in a very wealthy and prosperous family but not until the world crisis which deeply and badly affected not only my country, but the world, and thence my family’s financial. However, I developed a keen awareness of the fragility of life with the new sense of appreciating for the simplest of my old comforts. Although life is unfair, reproaching such forces does not make a difference, in fact I believe that the only solution to achieve equity and fairness is to work hard and never give up.
Since ever young, I have determined to be a successful