‘Not my business’ by Niyi Osundare is a poem that is linked to war and slavery. The poem uses modern language and more poetic devices, which makes it quite easy to understand and more interesting to read. ‘Vultures’ by Chinua Achebe is linked to a more sinister but romantic theme. This poem is not as easy to understand like ‘Not my business’ because the language used is more formal and the author uses more descriptive words and less poetic devices. So these poems are quite different but have a few similarities.
‘Not my business’ relates to war and slavery because it talks about people being taken away and beaten up. This poem has a hidden message which is ‘what goes around comes back around’ also known as Karma. This is because the main character in the poem doesn’t help other characters in the poem when bad things happen to them, so at the end something bad happens to him.
‘Vultures’ is about two vultures that are in love. This poem’s hidden message is that even ugly creatures can find love and that you shouldn’t judge a book by its cover. The author also compares the vultures to humans.
‘Not my business’ uses a variety of poetic devices such as similes, personification, metaphors, alliteration and repetition. It uses a more devices and they are more understandable than ‘Vultures’. A simile used in ‘Not my business’ is ‘Beat him soft like clay’. This simile was used to describe how Akanni was beat up and it shows that the people that beat him up were very strong as they describe it to be ‘soft like clay’. An alliteration used is ‘dragged Danladi’. The use of this alliteration emphasises the way they dragged him and it suggest that they dragged Danladi quite roughly. A personification used ‘the jeep was waiting on my bewildered lawn’. This personification gives the sense that the lawn was scared because the jeep was waiting which gives readers the sense that the character was scared was scared when