My writing workshop experience as a freshman was successful‚ time devoting‚ and different. It is different from my past experiences in writing‚ because I had the opportunity to chose my own topic‚ and had most of the year to improve each of my pieces. I enjoyed the process‚ and thought it was very helpful to receive feedback from both my peers‚ family‚ and teacher. I had enough time to edit mistakes I missed the first time around‚‚ and the chance to receive edits from others who had different perspectives
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It was in the middle of July when we got the email that my Uncle had been diagnosed with cancer. When we got to his house he looked ok but he said he was in pain. Once we went to the hospital he had to go in to chemotherapy and radiation. One day when we went to the hospital we learned that he did not have enough white blood cells at the moment due to the treatments. He had to wait for a few days and during those days he was in pain. Steven was having troubles with eating so that started to become
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At the age of seven I enter prison‚ my life took a different direction at a young age where I was surrounded by people I didn’t know and faces I never recognize or even known existed. That was the day I came to America‚ imagine being taken away from the one place you called home to another dimension where people spoke a complete different language from the one you knew since birth. The angry and confused‚ I felt was intense‚ trying to figure out where I belong in such a huge place without actually
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" Hey kids we need to talk about something‚" mom says. My brother‚ and I look at each other strangely. Ethan asked "what do you need to talk to us about mom?" Divorce the legal dissolution of a marriage. This is what happened to my parents in August of 2009 they got divorced. It was a very big challenge for me to face. At first it was just a separation which happened in 2007 then slowly turned into a divorce. I was young so I did not understand a lot of it. After the divorce I had to change
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As an Immigrant‚ there were many challenges I faced whether it’s related to language or understanding the culture. My family moved to United States of America when I was in 6th grade. I was always told by my parents that building a successful career is very important. This idea of building a successful career never stuck in my mind until the junior year of high school when I all sudden all the teachers and counselors started talking about going to college build a career in a field that you were interested
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M C FOOTBALL TIME eley one morning I had to get ready for football‚ so I got ready when we left the house my dogs startid to yap so we got going when we got to MC we stopt at sunries to git a drink and some thing to eat . my mom got a sluthey same thing with my dad i got a a troow moo melk and a slise of thatr pesu We got to the football field‚ the refs said game time .We won the coin toss‚ we received the ball‚ we ran it back for a TD‚ 7 to 0. The first play‚ we kick it to the other
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I have grown up in a predominately white neighborhood. This town is called Anacortes in Washington state and I have lived here my whole life. My mother is mexican and my father is black. I grew up thinking that I was slightly different from everyone else but not really looking at it in a negative manner. Racism didn’t seem like a big deal because i have never personally had to deal with it and it still seems like a far off idea‚ one that is there but not connected to me. My father works for the
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Personal Experience It was on the 25th of October when we were celebrating a religious holiday called Eid al Ad’ha. It is somewhat like Christmas as our tradition is eat cook a feast‚ which is composed of rice‚ cooked with several spices and lamb chops. But this instead of lamb chops we cooked a whole goat. We had to bring that much meat due to the fact that there was such a large number of friends celebrating with us. We were about 30 people and because of that number we had to find a place that
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Personal Experience 2:35 a.m. Even though it was something that I had experienced before‚ the pain still took me my surprise. And it was only the beginning. I had finally fallen asleep around midnight. My parents had come down to Indiana for a weekend visit and we had stayed up a little late enjoying our visit with each other after the boys had gone to bed. There were two bedrooms in my little apartment and I had given them the use of mine‚ deciding to sleep with my two children in the other
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Throughout everyone’s life‚ they face adversity at some point in time that they have to overcome it. The adversities they battle are different for everyone. Sometimes‚ personal battles can push people out of their right mind. This is how I felt one day during my sixth grade year. I was eating lunch and started to feel ill. At first‚ I thought‚ flu? Something I ate? As it turned out‚ that is when my battle began‚ and battle I am still dealing with. A battle with anxiety. Before this day‚ I had
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