PIE paragraph model do help me a lot in how to develop a paragraph reasonably and logically. Before I learned the PIE paragraph model‚ my writing process was blindly and desultorily. After given a topic‚ I just slightly thought of what it was and what it might concern about‚ and then I wrote them down without even placing them in an organized order‚ making my paragraph unpersuasive and unfocused. Even more‚ though it was so “improvisational”‚ I didn’t revise it‚ and fragments and run-ons would not
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Daryl Turner Harrison Bergeron Paragraph No it would not be beneficial if society got rid of all competition‚ which really applies with sports. Sports is all about competition and someone trying to beat out someone for a higher ranking. But if we outlaw all competition from today’s society then a lot of sports would be very spiritless. For example‚ when I watch a football game I want to feel very anxious when my favorite team is down by one point and there’s only 10 seconds in the game. But
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Opening Paragraph McCandless was searching for freedom and the chance to truly become an individual. Alaska gave McCandless a place where he could be far away from everything that held him back. One of these was certain human relationships in his life. “You are wrong if you think Joy emanates only or principally from human relationships.” (Krakauer‚42) McCandless did not feel that he needed people around him to feel happy. Next Sentence One major change that McCandless had was his opinion on relationships
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Advertisement Advertising is one of the best ways to get consumers’ attention. When the ad is spiced up with handsome men and beautiful women enjoying the great outdoors‚ people are likely to take a look at the ad‚ thinking it may be for a nice vacation or possibly for something healthy‚ but to the consumers’ surprise‚ it’s an ad for “Newport” cigarettes. How does this affect the audience? By creating an environment on the ad that is bright‚ lively and colorful‚ along with attractive men and women
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general term for anything that involves delivering hosted services over the Internet.” (Rouse‚ 2010‚ para. 1). Cloud computing consists of three different types of services: 1) Infrastructure as a Service (IaaS)‚ 2) Platform as a Service (PaaS)‚ and 3) Software as a Service (SaaS). (Laudon & Brabston‚ 2012). “A cloud may be private or public. A public cloud is maintained by an external service provider accessed through the Internet‚ and available to the general public. A private cloud is a proprietary
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and I stated that before but did not state how it supported my argument. So‚ I included how it may have harmed or affected others who read it‚ just like it affected me. I added topic sentences to the beginnings of my paragraph to help support my claim and show what my paragraph was going to contain and be about. Most of my revisions involved stating the harm or danger or the negative effects that reading this book could have on the high school students‚ because this was the main focus for taking
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Joe Gannon Dr. Rachel Reznik CAS 404 September 21‚ 2014 Understanding is of the Essence Conflict situations are an everyday occurrence. With the understanding of the underlying factors of positive and negative communication conducted in situations of conflict‚ will only enable one to become more solution oriented in times of battle. The three perspectives discussed in chapter two of Working through Conflict are the following: psychodynamic‚ emotion-based‚ and the social cognition perspective
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Four paragraphs short story It was about ten years ago‚ I was nine at that time. During the summer vacation‚ our family visited an uncle who lived in a village in Sichuan. We stayed there for a week‚ which I thought it seemed three months. That place made me feel uncomfortable. One early morning‚ I was awakened by father and requested to work in farm for a day as uncle was sick suddenly. My work that morning was to feed the chickens. The living environment was simple and crude as only straw and
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Timeline Paragraphs Event #1‚ titled: ‘Deciding to Escape’‚ is the most important event in the story. This event introduces the conflict and starts off the story. In ‘Deciding to Escape’‚ we learn that Connor knows he is going to be unwound. Connor decides to run away with Ariana‚ but Ariana refuses the offer. Without the first event happening‚ the rest of the book wouldn’t have happened or would have been changed dramatically. For example‚ if Ariana didn’t suggest they run away‚ than Connor might
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“Paragraph by Process Analysis” It’s a Snap! Pictures really help us understand things better but many people don’t know how to take them! Today‚ I’d like to show you how easy it is to take pictures with an automatic digital camera. You will need a light or sunny place‚ a simple digital camera with good batteries and a memory card in it‚ a little knowledge about the controls‚ and a subject you want to photograph. If you have all of these‚ then you are ready for the first step: go to
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