The quality of the thesis statement is outstanding as it is a complete sentence and makes a point without moving into the first person like I feel‚ In my opinion‚ and the rest. Furthermore‚ it conveys the topic clearly where the reader gets significant information about what ought to be discussed throughout the paper. Nevertheless‚ the thesis statement needs to outline something interesting that will make the reader salivate and have the urge to continue reading. That is‚ it needs to hold the attention
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Assignment 02 ; Semester 2/ 9 September 2013. Rough draft: Thesis statement Trying to mould ourselves into the perfect image that is portrayed by the media is a waste of time and money. So don’t try to obtain something that is false mirror image. Look where it left Michael Jackson‚ stressed and obsessed. One can ask the question who decided how we must look and dress.? Is it a false perception created by society. Do we point the blame finger at ourselves or at people from the past?
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PROMPT: Do you think Ender’s own view of himself‚ that he’s just like Peter‚ is true or not? Explain your answer‚ and use at least ONE piece of evidence from the text that supports your answer. PROMPT: Do you think Ender’s own view of himself‚ that he’s just like Peter‚ is true or not? Explain your answer‚ and use at least ONE piece of evidence from the text that supports your answer. PROMPT: Do you think Ender’s own view of himself‚ that he’s just like Peter‚ is true or not? Explain your answer
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to end a life. Most of us don’t think of the dangers that can occur when sending a text while driving. Imagine a sixteen year old teenager‚ driving on the roads; all of a sudden the teen receives a text from a friend. A split second later‚ an accident occurs; the teen that couldn’t wait to send a text has just slammed into the back of a semi-truck; this accident ends the life of a kid that had so much life left to live. The grieving family is left to wonder how this tragedy could have been prevented
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Essay: how an event is represented impacts how we come to understand it better ? Thesis Statement: → Ones emotional journey through an experience from a past historical event often shapes individuals into how they are in the future INTRO : Ones emotional journey through an experience from a past historical event often shapes individuals into how they are in the future. The emotional impact of these events can be representing and recorded in various ways‚ such as within the Smithsonian website
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Outline Thesis Statement: Arranged marriages have different forms mostly depending on the couples country‚ culture and social surrounding conditions; however‚ not all of these forms are acceptable‚ successful and respectable by many societies. I.In arranged marriages‚ the possibility of its success is unknown and depending on the culture of the couple and the type of this arranged marriage. A.If the couple is from the same region or society the chances of having a successful marriage is great
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Thesis Statement and Outline America’s education: the molten pot of diverse races‚ cultures‚ morals‚ values‚ ideas‚ and beliefs‚ of which‚ shape the character of young influential minds in public and home schools. Introduction I. The foundation for America’s public education. A. The nineteenth century public schools. 1. Diverse races/immigration. 2. Moral Education. B. The twenty-first century public schools. 1. Achievement scores began to decline
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Introduction w/ Thesis Statement The passing of the No Child Left Behind act (NCLB) in 2002 changed the classroom for both teachers and students alike. This act was a reauthorization of the Elementary and Secondary Education act and within the changes made the federal government required that public schools in all states would annually test all students in grades 3 through 8 and once again in highschool in the subjects of math and reading (Ladd‚ 2017). While the motivation behind this reform was the
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Greek Art And Sculptures My Thesis Statement The Greeks were the first civilization to make accurate sculptures because they were so focused on detail and technique. W hat D id Gr eek S culpt ures Repre sent ? Greek sculptures represented many different things such as battles‚mythology‚ and the ruler of Ancient Greek. Some examples of rulers of Ancient Greek are Polycrates‚Periander‚Evagoras‚etc. What Material Did They Use To Build Sculptures. They built the sculptures out of entirely
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Thesis statement The Tell- Tale Heart finds its own way in literature using methods that were once new at the time‚ however are still part of the core foundation of modern literature. With the use of building anticipation‚ dynamic character transformation and making changes to the structure of the plot builds to the depth of the story. Edgar Allen Poe starts the story by building anticipation‚ when the character claims that others call him a madman the audience already start to wonder
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