Shelly K. Monk AC1209080 EN120 English Composition I Assignment 6 Two Paragraph Essay 10/31/2012 A Special or Unusual Person Being strong can be defined in so many ways. The strongest person I ever knew was my dad. My dad was the typical retired marine‚ he was strict and very detailed‚ but when it came to my sister and I‚ some would say he was a big teddy bear. He was strong in his faith in God and church. No matter what dilemmas or complications came
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Opening Paragraph McCandless was searching for freedom and the chance to truly become an individual. Alaska gave McCandless a place where he could be far away from everything that held him back. One of these was certain human relationships in his life. “You are wrong if you think Joy emanates only or principally from human relationships.” (Krakauer‚42) McCandless did not feel that he needed people around him to feel happy. Next Sentence One major change that McCandless had was his opinion on relationships
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PIE paragraph model do help me a lot in how to develop a paragraph reasonably and logically. Before I learned the PIE paragraph model‚ my writing process was blindly and desultorily. After given a topic‚ I just slightly thought of what it was and what it might concern about‚ and then I wrote them down without even placing them in an organized order‚ making my paragraph unpersuasive and unfocused. Even more‚ though it was so “improvisational”‚ I didn’t revise it‚ and fragments and run-ons would not
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The introductory paragraph has to be interesting enough to convince the reader to continue reading while also stating some of the main points of the essay. It is just as important as the thesis statement. Much like the thesis statement‚ the introductory paragraph sets the tone and the reader’s frame of mind for the essay. The introductory paragraph should to support the thesis statement and vice-versa. It need to be well thought out and complement the essay. For this reason‚ it isn’t uncommon for
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After months of preparation and dedicating all of your free time to the sport‚ January 24 you finally get the one moment that all of your hours of practice have led up to. At the wrestling GAC there is one major difference between the wrestlers who train all year for this one moment and the ones who wait until the last minute; the feeling of the medal around your neck at the end of the day. 4:30 A.M.‚ the morning of January 24‚ you wake up on this day knowing that you either have a really good
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In the article “Unteaching the Five-Paragraph Essay”‚ Marie Foley argues that the five-paragraph formula restrains students from actively thinking. The five-paragraph structure is still used today because teachers are continuing to teach students the formula. The formula is said to be easier to teach to a class rather than to teach individual students different patterns of organization. Foley says that the formula being taught is easier on them to teach and to grade because of how crowded the English
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METHODS of PARAGRAPH DEVELOPMENT DEFINITION Topic: Laptop – meaning and function A laptop is a compact type of personal computer. It is made to be handy and accessible to use. It can be battery operated or can be plugged to the AC outlet. Most businessmen and professionals who are always mobile are using it for their work. Even students now have laptops for their studies. Although it is compact‚ it is still equipped with proper speed to do fast computations‚ analysis‚ and graphics designing
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In this video‚ VCU 17th annual international business forum the center topic of discussion is the ‘sustainability in era of globalization”. Key issues regarding sustainability is being discussed here. Sustainability means to meet the needs of present generation without compromising the need for future generation. If we see current situation multinational corporations have no interest in the long term - particularly in time spans measured in generations. They make their decisions based on return
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Anthropology 2A Reading response #1 9/30/13 Article 19. Who Needs Love! The author of‚ “Who Need Love!” Nicholas D. Kristof interviewed several married couples in Japan about their marriages. The answer was surprising; most of the couples in Japan are‚ by international standards‚ exceptionally incompatible. However the strength of the Japanese family is extremely higher than the ones in the U.S. The divorce rate in the U.S. is 55 percents‚ however the divorce rate in Japan is almost only half
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Prayer is an invocation or act that seeks to activate a rapport with a deity‚ an object of worship‚ or a spiritual entity through deliberate communication. Prayer can be a form of religious practice‚ may be either individual or communal and take place in public or in private. It may involve the use of words or song. When language is used‚ prayer may take the form of a hymn‚ incantation‚ formal creed‚ or a spontaneous utterance in the praying person. There are different forms of prayer such as petitionary
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