Good and Weak Thesis Statements There is really no wrong way to write a thesis statement‚ you either have a good or a weak thesis. I am going to explain four weak thesis statements I was given‚ then tell you what was weak about them and how to make it better. A weak thesis fails to take a stand and not be specific towards the topic. Just making an observation or an overly broad claim will not work. A good thesis is ideas that answers a question‚ it usually starts with an observation that is something
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Ecological Cataclysm Ascribed to Synthetic Fertilizers: A Sentence Outline Thesis Statement: To ensure the preservation of mammalian populations native to North America‚ it is vital for Americans to establish an understanding of what synthetic fertilizer‚ along with acknowledging how its excessive application is cataclysmic for aquaculture and wildlife ecosystems. I. To comprehend the magnitude of synthetic fertilizer effects‚ it is vital knowing what synthetic fertilizer is‚ on a molecular level
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1) Which idea is illustrated by the Supreme Court cases Schenck v. United States and Korematsu v . United States? 1. The free speech rights of Communists have often been violated. 2. During wartime‚ limitations on civil rights have been upheld by judicial action. 3. The rights of protestors have been preserved even in times of national stress. 4. Economic interests of foreign nations are frequently upheld in United States courts. 2) The Dred Scott decision on the issue of slavery upheld the
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Thesis Statement Many people have their own beliefs and reasoning ’s when it comes down to Gay Marriage. Me personally I think that Gay Marriage shouldn ’t be even allowed. God made it to be a man and women to join hands together and say vows the right way. But however in some states it is a legal to get married to the same sex. Outline Statement All societies need a means to harness or control the sexual drives‚ especially of young people. In the past‚ society has greatly encouraged young people
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Outline I. Introduction Thesis Statement: They all may find several important repercussions about that but generally‚ population suffer three alarming effects: nausea‚ headache and dry mouth. II. Nausea 1. According to a study by Harvard University only 15 percent of the binge drinkers feel this symptom. III. Headache 1. The latest data showed that 72 percent of people with hangover feel this condition. Of whom‚ 65 percent are men and the remaining 7 percent are women. IV. Dry mouth
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“the practice or system of owning slaves”. Slavery‚ in the United States‚ is discussed in elementary school‚ read about in high school‚ and dismissed in adulthood. This is‚ mainly‚ due to the fact that slavery is obsolete in the eyes of those born and raised in the United States. This is subsequently understandable‚ as slavery has been abolished for more than 150 years. The history of the slavery is important to the history of the United States‚ as it is the truth of what has happened. Slavery was‚ and
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Obesity has been a serious health problem in the United States in the past ten years. More and more people suffer from obesity and the problem should not be ignored. We should tackle it wisely and effectively. In this paper‚ we are going to analyse the obesity situation in the United States and recommend solutions for those who are suffering from this sickness. Furthermore‚ the other purpose of this paper is to encourage people to do more excercise and have more healthy meals in order to maintain
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Thesis Statement: Gun control decreases crime. If gun control is regulated‚ then we will have less crime. Access to firearms makes killing easy‚ efficient‚ and impersonal‚ which increases the lethality of crime. Josh Sugarmann‚ the Executive Director of the Violence Policy Center has once said‚ "We recoil in horror and search for explanations‚ but we never face up to the obvious preventive measure: a ban on the handy killing machines that make crimes so easy.”Allowing untrained people to carry
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Jasmine Criner AP US History Period 1 August 22nd 2013 Mr.Pierre There are many stereotypes that pertain to black people. One that really stands out is "If you want to hide something from a black person hide it in a book" which the white man is trying to call us African Americans illiterate. Which is ignorant is so many type of ways. But yet we do nothing more to make that statement false by not being educated‚ well organized and full of wisdom. Years ago‚ when slavery was in its actions
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Citizenship in the United States has been a sought-after dream by many people in the World. It is the reason we are the “great melting pot”‚ and the reason for the many mass immigrations that have taken place to the United States. Over the course of two centuries‚ there has been much turmoil in United States politics about giving citizenship status to immigrants. Most of the latter reasoning for not wanting to grant citizenship has been blamed justly on the prejudice of American Society. The Supreme
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