April‚ Thank you for sharing your story. I’ll admit‚ I was hesitant to read it because I hate thinking about funerals. However‚ I wanted to give you some feedback‚ so here I am. 1. To make it seem more realistic‚ I would add dialogue. This ties into your question #3. I don’t think that all stories need tons of dialogue‚ but to me‚ it feels like I’m getting a lot of backstory before I ever see anything from the character’s point of view. Maybe add past of someone’s eulogy? I’ve been to one funeral
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many toddlers‚ I was fascinated by building blocks. They held me spellbound for hours on end and pushed me to make some imaginative‚ if not structurally unsafe buildings. I thus grew up with a great passion for architecture‚ and was very certain I would one day be an architect. But as I drifted into Secondary school‚ my interests changed. History‚ among all subjects captivated me the most. I grew very much interested in the past‚ and as I went from “Ancient Egypt” to “Communist Russia” I found myself
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title Losing someone you love is a horrible experience in anyone’s life‚ especially if it is a parent. Losing both of your parents in a matter of four months is one of the worst things that can possibly happen. I was born in Arizona and lived in my hometown‚ Phoenix‚ until I was three years old. My dad went to jail so my mom‚ sister‚ two brothers and I moved to Chicago because that is where my mom’s side of the family lives. We lived there for four years until my dad got out of jail. My
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104 04/23/13 When is it the right time to advocate for a patient? Modern nursing is complex‚ ever changing‚ and multi focused. Since the time of Florence Nightingale the goal of nursing has remained unchanged. Mainly to provide a safe and caring environment that promotes patient health and wellbeing. Effective use of an interpersonal tool‚ such as advocacy‚ enhances the care giving environment. Nightingale used advocacy early and often in the development of modern nursing. By reading her many
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I woke up one day and I realised I was dope but then i remember I was indian.. Then i ate some curry then cried for a while :( This is my idol his name is l9ord vishnu In Hindu sacred texts‚ Vishnu is usually described as having dark complexion of water-filled clouds and as having four arms. He is depicted as a blue being‚ holding a padma (lotus flower) in the lower left hand‚ the Kaumodaki gada (mace) in the lower right hand‚ the Panchajanya shankha (conch) in the upper left hand and the discus
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Before reading this book if I saw someone like Auggie I would have definitely reacted differently. The character I think I would have reacted similar to would be Charlotte. In the book August says when he meets Charlotte “she gave me a quick wave‚ a smile‚ and said nice to meet you”. If I were to meet someone like Auggie I probably would have done something similar. Normally when meeting someone I would shake his or her hand but I would most likely be a little shy around someone like August. Charlotte
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father that I once knew would never be the same again. My father was now permanently living in a nursing home. He could not speak anymore nor walk he was totally dependent on the help of others to assist him with everyday living. My mom did not make enough money to hire a nurse to take care of him at home so she had to put him a nursing home. This was a very hard time for me because the fun‚ laughable‚ and enjoyable father that I once known and loved to death was not the same anymore. I was depressed
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I would hate to be famous. When you’re famous‚ you don’t have any privacy. Also‚ there’s too much criticism. Lastly‚ it can harm my safety. Being famous isn’t all that great‚ like you think it is. Many people who are famous have many problems and sometimes wish that they weren’t famous at all. I do not want to be famous. First‚ when you’re famous‚ you do not have any privacy. Paparazzi will follow you‚ and take pictures of every single thing you do. The paparazzi are very aggravating
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I have often been a fraidy cat about the simplest things. I remember back when I was a child and being frightened of leaving home to go to school — it was as if I feared that my family would not be there when I got back from school or that I wouldn’t know what to do in school. All my life I’ve had similar fears about many things — being able to do a good job and succeed at my work‚ worrying whether I’d grow up to become an independent individual who could stand on his own two feet. And‚ each time
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Dickenson’s “I Heard a Fly Buzz When I Died‚” Kerry Michael Wood asserts that‚ “If ever a poem invited individual interpretation‚ this one does. It poses questions. It gives no answers… Is the fly invoked because flies tend to feast on dead flesh‚ or is it merely an ironical opposition to some glorious manifestation of Divinity…I hazard no opinions of my own.” Wood is correct in his stating that the poem provides many questions without offering any definite answers to them‚ but unlike Wood I would like
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