In this assignment‚ we will attempt to utilize some of the concepts of legal writing that we will discuss in class. Below you will find an essay that‚ to put it mildly‚ needs a bit of work. The wording is verbose and uses “slang”. There is no focus or organization to the essay and the case citations are in the wrong places and in the incorrect format. Your assignment is to: 1) Critique the essay and explain‚ point by point‚ what is wrong with the essay; and 2) Re-write (salvage) the essay
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Preschoolers require constant supervision and a consistent staff that know the children. This is critical for a safe and healthy learning environment for infants. An appropriate amount of staff members is needed to supervise all of the preschoolers that know the indoor and outdoor arrangement of the child-care center. In order to be developmentally appropriate for preschoolers the physical set up of the classroom must include staff members checking all areas regularly‚ keeping high traffic areas
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instead of joining his side. While trying to convince Antigone that he was a bad person‚ he said “An enemy can never be a friend‚ not even in death” (302. 607). But Antigone stayed persistent and claimed “Hades still desires equal rites for both” (301. 592). She was trying to prove that the Gods’ Laws were the more powerful than Creon’s‚ and that he was being unjust. After not listening to Antigone‚ he decided he was going to take her to die‚ despite the wishes of his son‚ Haemon‚ and her sister Ismene
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Many people may believe that the short story “Hills like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemingway is a very remarkable story to recall. This story teaches the readers a life lesson that most couples have to deal with. Unfortunately‚ some couples do not know how to deal with their differences so they just ignore their issues which only makes things worse. I would most likely remember “Hills like White Elephants” by Ernest Hemingway five years from now because Hemingway uses symbolism and conflict to address
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AJ Kozman Mr. Childress English- 1A 15 October 2015 Bag Skate "Get on the line!" ordered Coach. "Blue line back‚ red line back‚ far blue line back‚ and goal line back. Then‚ in push-up position walk to the red line and sit-ups to the goal line to finish." The frigid ice grabbed my back. My muscles were burning. I was trying to accomplish only one thing‚ getting air. The strong scent of sweaty hockey gear and poorly cleaned bathrooms hit me like a wall when I walked into the cramped
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Who am I My name is Alquin Jo Calisang but my friends refer to me as” Aj”. I am 21 years old and I currently studying Bachelor of Science in Nutrition and Dietetic. I was born in the Philippines; I have 3 siblings; one sister and two brother. My parents have very high expectations for me. They would often compare me to other and pick on the things I need to work on. Furthermore‚ throughout my life I have become very competitive and hardworking. At the same time‚ ever since I was a little‚ I have
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99 NAMES OF ALLAH S.W.T. 1. Ar-Rahman * The One who has plenty of mercy for the believers and the blasphemers in this world and especially for the believers in the hereafter. 2. Ar-Rahim * The One who has plenty of mercy for the believers. 3. Al-Malik * The One with the complete Dominion‚ the One Whose Dominion is clear from imperfection. 4. Al-Quddus * The One who is pure from any imperfection and clear from children and adversaries. 5. As-Salam * The One who is free from every
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justification that she is a selfish person. In a debate with her husband‚ Norma questions “If it’s someone you’ve never seen in your life and never will see‚ someone whose death you don’t even have to know about‚ you still wouldn’t push the button” (592). This quote portrays the true character of Norma‚ she doesn’t even consider the impact on others she will have in pushing the button. As long as the death doesn’t affect Norma‚ she isn’t concerned with what happens‚ this is an example of
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Genomic Techniques in Ecological Genomics Ecological genomics is “an interdisciplinary field that seeks to understand the genetic and physiological basis of species interactions for evolutionary inferences” (Renn‚ Siemens 2010). Here I will focus on the genomic techniques that can be used to answer ecological genomic questions. An overarching goal in the field of ecological genomics is to find the genes that matter in species interactions‚ and then to study the ecological consequences
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Table of Contents 1. Abstract 1 2. Introduction 2 3. Body 3 4. Conclusion 4 5. Reference List 5 Abstract In general‚ International Financial Reporting Standards (IFRSs) promotes uniformity‚ understandable‚ enforceable and globally accepted international financial reporting standards. It would be important to find out more concerning IFRSs. The essay centres on the pros and cons of adoption of IFRSs by the Australian and Malaysian companies. Unfortunately‚ my findings conclude that disadvantages
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