(HS)2 and the impact it has had on me Cianne‚ here are my edits. I went through each paragraph mainly because your essay is too long. Don’t think it’s because its not a good essay! I think you have some really great points in this essay and I like the topic. You just need to work through it to decide what you find to be most important. Things to remember while editing: Show don’t tell and this essay is about YOU and not just the program or what Colorado has to offer. Great work so far. Keep editing
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Alcoholism: Disease or Choice? Danielle M Ellis WVNCC Abstract Webster’s New World Dictionary defines alcoholism as a chronic condition which is mainly characterized by excessive and compulsive consumption of and dependence on alcohol as well as nutritional and mental disorders. This definition depicts alcoholism as a disease that is beyond one’s control. It has however been argued in some circles that alcoholism is a choice and the idea of alcoholism as a disease is a myth. Since it is an individual
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parents told me we were moving the California. I was absolutely thrilled. California was purely an abstract and conceptual mirage-type of place‚ too far away to know where it was‚ and too far away to really understand. The magical land of celebrities‚ skyscrapers and colossal burgers. A place where everything was possible‚ where dreams could actually become true‚ and where you had the ability to do what you wanted and be happy. This naive and unrealistic vision of California has affected my childhood
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Violence‚ a pain that can be physically repaired‚ but not emotionally. Violence has affected my life by making me more cautious of my environment‚ a cause to violence is peer pressure‚ I could help stop violence by advising and getting help. Violence has affected my life by making me more cautious of my environment. I remember the time when I and my family came back from fellowship‚ as we were getting out of the car a green truck pulled over behind us. Two men came out of the truck and started
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It is difficult to come up with solutions or ways to slow down alcoholism; however‚ this challenge isn’t stopping doctors from continuing their research. As they look towards the future‚ it seems as though with every answer they obtain they are working towards stopping alcoholism. One of the ideas to stop it is perhaps creating a drug that targets the gene that is increasing the chances of alcoholism‚ “each new addiction gene identified becomes a potential ‘drug target.’ That is researchers can focus
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How has charismatic worship impacted Christians in general and for 3 specific denominations? Charismatic worship has impacted Christians in general as it infuses corporate worship with a new life and has provided Christians with more choice in how they worship. It offers a livelier and more vibrant approach to worship that was previously not available. The charismatic renewal (CR) impacted Roman Catholics (RC) quite a lot. RCs have three documents that agree with the teachings of the CR. For example
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Alcoholism and its effects on society The alcohol is a terrible disease that effects not only your own body and mental health but also it effects everybody who surrounds you. By being an alcoholic you are experiencing all different types of problems. It can be either a problem with a lack of money that will bring you to the friends who are going to get tired of it sooner or later‚ or alcohol will ruin your healthy relationship with your family and your lovely kids. People who are
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in part ‚ in the changing needs of society Choose a technology (advances in dietary products‚ advances in fitness equipment‚ advances in transplant technology‚ advances in diagnostic equipment‚ etc.). Create a timeline showing how that technology has advanced over
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Filial piety developed from Confucianism‚ it is an elements that affects Chinese culture and tradition. Filial piety also established a family system‚ which has influences on most Chinese families. Because from the cultural concept‚ most families has the social value for each family numbers‚ such as‚ man should be the center of the family‚ the children of the family should be always obey their parents. Women’s social status and family status was lower than men‚ because from the Confucianism ideology
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First time My mom got very affected my behavior . It was a long time ago when I was 6years old. Six Months before My mom had had a bad sudden unplanned bad gunshot . Someone almost killed my mother.The person had a gun and was trying to stop a car. That car’s brake failed .He thoughts the only way to be stopped that car was to empty air pressure of the tires. While he was trying to check if he has a bullet in his gun he fired side of the door thinking there’s no one will be that door
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