6.10 Document for Analysis – Poorly Written E-Mail Message‚ p. 141 Your task. Study the following message. In teams or in class discussion‚ list at least five specific weaknesses. If your instructor directs‚ revise to remedy flabby expressions‚ long lead-ins‚ there is/are fillers‚ trite business expressions‚ clichés‚ slang‚ buried verbs‚ lack of parallelism‚ and general wordiness. Look for ways to improve readability with bulleted or numbered points. To: Marcy Love <marcy.love@sokia
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language than their mother language. In the article Amy Tan’s “Mother Tongue”‚ Amy Tan emphasized her idea that we speak different languages unconsciously and we are categorized by the way we talk. The author talked about her mother who is a Chinese emigrant wanted to provide her daughter a better environment to grow up and spoke “broken” and “limited” English‚ but anyway‚ Amy can still communicate with her mother without obstacles. Throughout the story Amy Tan uses pathos and ethos to tell us that how
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The Death of Amy Latour Amy Latour’s body was found dead last night in her bedroom‚ evidence found at the scene suggests that Amy Latour was in fact strangled by her own maid‚ Celeste due to getting tired of taking care of Ms. Amy Latour. First of all‚ the crime scene showed signs that the murderer was in fact her maid. Due to the way the crime scene is set up Ms. Latour seems to be getting ready for an event‚ which means she must’ve been looking in the mirror‚ which also means she could see the
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Composition & Literature | Amy Tan | Professor Blum | JAEL VARGAS 12/17/2012 | This story’s main events take place in Chinatown throughout the 1950s and perhaps early 1960s. The main character of the story‚ who is also the protagonist‚ is the author herself: Amy Tan. The antagonist happens to be her own mother‚ who is always pushing Amy to discover some hidden talent and be someone she is not. There are a few other minor characters in the story. There is Lindo Jong (who she calls
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daily lives. The nutrition and metabolic pattern continues with help of the parents. Toddlers and preschoolers rely on their parents to make sure that they are eating the right foods. School age kids are in the stage where they can pick out their own foods and have been taught what the best sources of good nutrition are. In the toddler age group‚ parents are beginning to initiate toileting training. By the school age years this age groups has elimination patterns similar to adults. With the exception
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I believe Amy Tan’s purpose for "Mother Tongue" was to make others aware of the different forms of English Language that has been translated by different cultures‚ specifically the Chinese translation. I arrived at that decision because she clearly expresses personal emotions‚ opinions‚ life events‚ and observations. I don’t believe the author’s goal changed throughout this analytical process. I found one other key point while conducting active reading on my selected article. On page 21 the author
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One similarity is that foot strike patterns only changed in footwear‚ speed had little to no effect on foot strike pattern. Another similarity is what occurred when speed was increased under each condition. Both Fredericks and Francis found that an increase in speed under a shod condition will cause an increase in step length‚ and
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“Rules of the Game” “Rules of the Game” was written by Amy Tan. This short story takes place in Chinatown district of San Francisco during the 1950’s. Waverly was known as the child prodigy after she grew interest of chess while her brothers were playing it one day. Her brother‚ Vincent‚ had received a used chess set that were also missing some pieces from a Baptist Church Christmas Party that her family had attended. Waverly‚ being six years old‚ learns to play chess and becomes a national
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emotions as the reason for their failure. Although misogynistic norms deemed women as emotionally unstable‚ scientifically impaired‚ and virtually unfit to compete with the musical canon‚ Amy Beach transcended the role of a docile woman. Her most renowned symphony‚ the Gaelic Symphony‚ demonstrates
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Nisha Mahase Prof. Larry Hartzell July 25‚ 2012 Hist 135 In “Women‚ Work and Protest in the Early Lowell Mills‚” the author talks about the working life and it’s foundation in the early industrial revolution by talking about the Lowell Mill girls. During this time‚ America was undergoing a transformation from agricultural country to a powerful industrialized nation. Today‚ men are holding more strenuous factory jobs but back in those days‚ women occupied them. Most women were
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