Anthony’s Dilemma Story response After reading your discussion question answer‚ I have to agree with your classmates about it sounding sexist. You wrote you’re posting the same way you would talk to another person face to face. However‚ when you are communicating online‚ it is important to use inclusive language when you write it so it won’t sound as if you are speaking to specific people or genders and no one in your audience is singled out. There were several mistakes in the content of your
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An In the story "Anthony’s Dilemma"‚ Anthony uses non-comprehensive language in describing a business situation. While he may not have been intentionally sexist‚ his use of language shows that he expects professionals and business people to be male‚ and that women in the business world are rare. It is important for Anthony to improve his sexist language‚ as he says‚ so that he won’t offend anyone‚ but‚ more importantly‚ so that he will help to create an environment that everyone feels they belong
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Anthony’s Dilemma Story Anthony it’s always important to use proper tone‚ words‚ and etiquette when writing to your classmates or instructors. In your response it’s important to be clear who your talking to because there’s a fine line between professional and personal. Keep in mind of your audience. When you started you said‚ “Hi Guys” that greeting is more personal then professional. I can see why that might be offensive to woman because you use phrase like that throughout your response to your
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determine the route to take to getting the vehicle fixed. I really appreciate your assistance with this and if you need to contact me‚ you may do so by email at mpmac79@yahoo.com or by phone at 713-890-2504. Sincerely‚ Mr. Anthony MacMurray Anthony’s Dilemma It is important to make sure that one uses inclusive language when communicating in a class forum so that the person speaking knows that they are getting their point across. It is quite important to make sure that when one is speaking the
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Communicating In Forums - Anthony’s Dilemma Carla Landes Gen/105 September 25‚ 2011 Arianne P. Bellizaire Communicating In Forums - Anthony’s Dilemma To me‚ it is very important when speaking in class forums that I choose my inclusive phrasing well. One should never make assumptions when communicating in forums and phrase comments as if in a "professional" setting. When posting most of my responses to discussion questions‚ I try to address a specific person and usually not the entire
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Tony C reached up and rubbed his forehead‚ as if trying to rid himself of a headache‚ but it wasn’t a headache. "Nothing changes‚ nothing ever changes‚" he muttered. The words leaving a bitter taste as they flowed with ease from his mouth. Admitting this however‚ changed nothing‚ and he had admitted it‚ many times. Staring at the slit of late afternoon sunlight filtering through the small window over his kitchen table‚ he watched dust motes float in the air‚ suspended in the sun’s rays like their
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Response to “The Story of an Hour” The story mainly talks about complex emotions of Mrs. Mallard towards the news of her husband’s death along with her inner reflections upon living‚ death‚ and freedom. The emotional change of Mrs. Mallard is an essential clue throughout the whole story. At first‚ she was deep in sorrow after hearing the bad news that “she wept at once‚ with sudden‚ wild abandonment”. Then‚ she realized that her husband’s passing away actually set her free physically and mentally
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A response to “The Story of An Hour” By Kate Chopin Kate Chopin’s short story titled “The Story of An Hour” focuses on the life-changing events that transpire within an hour in the life of a certain Louise Mallard‚ before ultimately leading to her demise. The story begins as the news of her husband’s death is broken to Mrs. Mallard‚ with utmost care‚ as apparently she suffers from a heart disease. Although‚ over stricken with grief and sadness at first‚ soon she comes to accept the incident
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Oliva Professor English 2030-021 February 22‚ 2012 The Short Happy Life of Louise Mallard “The Story of an Hour‚” by Kate Chopin displays the internal battle of Mrs. Mallard and her struggle with independence. Due to unforeseen circumstances‚ Mrs. Mallard’s negative outlook on her life and marriage suddenly changed into a confident and independent glimpse of the future. What was initially a negative outlook on matrimony‚ quickly developed into a confident and independent demeanor. The audience
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The short shorty by Kate Chopin‚ The Story of an Hour means that no one should settle for what they do not want. Nelson Mandela once said‚ “There is no passion to be found in settling for a life that is less than the one you are capable of living.” I believe everyone has the potential to be happy in life‚ whether they chose to or not. Mrs. Mallard should not have to settled for marring the wrong or “not fitted to her standards” type of marriage. When she found out her husband was dead‚ she was ecstatic
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