Associate Level Material Appendix J Revision Analysis Feedback Received List the details provided in your feedback under each of the following categories. Revisions What changes you will make to revise your paper based on this feedback? Explain your answer. Example The instructor indicated that my research paper should not be written in first person. Example I will go through each page of my paper and remove the use of first person. I will rewrite each sentence properly
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Patrice Morris January 30‚ 2012 Com/156 Body Paragraphs Recycling and waste prevention are two very important ways to help address the issues of the environment concerning climate change. Recycling is a very beneficial factor that more individuals need to exercise in order to improve the environment’s pollution‚ reduce emissions of greenhouse gases‚ and save energy and natural resources that are used to produce products from virgin materials rather than from recycled materials‚ which uses less
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Web Source Evaluation What is your expository essay topic? My expository writing essay is on Healthy Eating and Dieting. Provide the URL of the Website? http://www.amazinghealth.org/ Provide the name of the website? Amazing Health Primary use: Other: I read the articles for tips on: healthy eating and recipes. What is the purpose or goal of this Web site? The goal of the website is to help people discover how they can live longer and live life to the fullest! To help people
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budget would be the best. There is hardly a person who does not have a hobby. Not only the educated but also the uneducated pursue one hobby or the other. Some of the common hobbies are reading books‚ painting‚ gardening‚ stamp collecting‚ coin-gathering‚ sewing‚ photography‚ writing letters to editors of newspapers‚ traveling etc. Selecting of hobby depends upon the time for hobbies. They become busy in shaping their careers. However‚ it is very important to develop a hobby. Some hobbies can improve
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E-commerce‚ in the popular sense‚ can be defined as: the use of the Internet and the Web to conduct business transactions. A more technical definition would be: e-commerce involves digitally enabled commercial transactions between and among organizations and individuals. Ecommerce differs from e-business in that no commercial transaction‚ an exchange of value across organizational or individual boundaries‚ takes place in e-business. E-business is the digital enablement of transactions and
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• Why is it important to be objective when receiving feedback? How might you use feedback to revise your rough draft to make it as effective as possible? It is important to be objective when receiving feedback to possibly consider room for improvement. Sometimes you don’t see the errors or mistakes you missed; by receiving feedback you might be able to catch the errors or mistakes because the person that gave you the feedback caught. The one thing you need to consider is that all feedback may
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Electronic Commerce‚ 7th Edition 14188-37032 Chapter 3 Solutions Review Questions 1. Write a paragraph in which you describe the conditions under which a Web site could become profitable by relying exclusively on advertising revenue. In a second paragraph‚ provide an example of a company not mentioned in the chapter that is using the advertising-supported model and that is likely to be successful in the long run. Explain why you think it will succeed. Answer: A Web site that relies exclusively
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Week Three Assignment COM/156 Axia College of University of Phoenix My essay is about why it is a better option to rent an apartment rather than own a home. A major decision that all adults will face is deciding if it better for them to rent or own their residence. I am going to show it is far more cost effective to live in a rental property rather than owning a property. The average cost of living in a rental property is far less than living in property that is owned. The comparison
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The Future of Social Security COM/156 December 5‚ 2010 Karen Williams The Future of Social Security In the United States‚ many people believe that Social Security will be enough to support them upon retirement and have not prepared themselves adequately by establishing pensions‚ retirement plans and savings accounts. Believing this way can get many people into trouble once they reach an age that they would like to retire. These people are finding out that Social Security is just not
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Animals: Working For a Living Kristin Pachella COM/156 September 22‚ 2012 Kelly Rottman Animals: Working For a Living There are many different types of animals that work for us. There are three types of service animals that help the disabled. Guide animals assist the blind‚ hearing animals signal the deaf‚ and there are many other animals that help persons with other disabilities. Another way that animals work for us is by providing emotional support to those with mental health issues
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