Editing Worksheet for Essay Drafts: ENG 111 Your Name Gregory Wishart 1. Name of the essay author Shakara Beals 2. Is the thesis statement the last sentence in the introductory paragraph and does it contain the three points? Yes ___ List the three points: a. liabilities incurred by the business b. financing of the business c. input and involvement in the business 3. Outline the essay below. Thesis Statement (copy) There are many similarities as well as differences
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The most rewarding experience I’ve had this summer would definitely be my vacation to Florida. For the first 2 days I got to spend time with my family‚ and my cousin Lauren‚ at St. Pete’s Beach. The ocean water was so warm and it felt amazing. We left St. Pete’s Beach with smiles on our faces bc we would soon be in Orlando‚ fl. Everyone in my family was excited to be on our way to Walt Disney World‚ where we would arrive the next day. The first day we were there we went to Magic kingdom‚ where Cinderella’s
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This past summer my family and I decided to vacation in Florida. Like any other vacation‚ our plan was to have an enjoyable time and destress. However‚ we experienced a sudden‚ nerve-racking situation. It did not compare to anything we had experienced before. We almost lost control. It was a rainy‚ humid summer afternoon in Disney’s Magic Kingdom. We were exhausted from all the walking we had done and thus decided to rest before heading to our next attraction. We sat on a bench near a food kiosk
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see and explore. The word Ontario itself is literally translated to “beautiful water‚” and it absolutely lives up to that name. While Ontario is not ordinarily a “vacation destination‚” there are several reasons why it should be. The province has an abundance of waterfalls‚ parks‚ and historical landmarks that make it a perfect vacation spot. There are several historical formations found in Ontario; among them‚
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As I get off the plane that just landed on a tropical island‚ nothing other than paradise and feelings of extravagance await me. For the small chunk of time I vacation here‚ no matter how hard I try‚ I cannot encounter anything except overwhelming joy. Hawaii is such a place that is located near the equator in the most southern region of the northern hemisphere. The weather there could not be better in quality. The perfect temperature‚ consisting within the mid-eighties along with the warm sun‚ enables
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thousands of people filled with anticipation. The noisy and colorful crowds are filled with people from all over the world with mouse ears upon their head. The crowds varied to children who have no clue to what is happening to couples on their first vacation together to the elderly wanting to enjoy the countless sites available at Disney.The beaming sun
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BOONTON‚ N.J.‚ -- During Christmastime in 2006‚ Toniann Ruja took a 10-day dream vacation to Hawaii with her husband and two daughters who were both in elementary school. “Both my husband at the time and I had a steady income‚ and we had been waiting for the financial opportunity for a trip like this‚” Ruja said as she sat at the kitchen table of her quaint townhouse that she bought four years ago‚ during her divorce. Within a year‚ Ruja’s husband lost both his trucking company and his income. Nearly
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Choosing a vacation can sometimes be difficult or even overwhelming. Especially when your family can be indecisive at times‚ it can be so much harder. Although when we saw Hocking Hills in a brochure we knew that’s where we wanted to go. Originally‚ we wanted to go to North Carolina‚ but my parents couldn’t find any hotels. Hockings Hills had breathtaking cabins and there were lots available at low cost. So Hocking Hills is what we chose instead. Off we went‚ on a 2 hour and 30 min car ride
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Ahmedabad‚ the city of Ahmed Shah (Medieval ruler of Gujarat)‚ is known for its rich past and its association with the Mahatma (Great Soul) Gandhi. The city offers a unique style of architecture‚ which is a blend of Hindu and Islamic styles (Indo-Saracenic style of architecture). The monuments of Ahmedabad mainly date back to the 15th century. Ahmedabad has been known for its industry since medieval times. It used to be famous for its textile mills and hence often referred to as the ’Manchester of
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New tourism dev’t plan to think ’beyond beaches’ The Philippines must think “beyond beach vacations” when promoting its tourism industry‚ a Department of Tourism official said at the recent unveiling of the department’s National Tourism Development Plan (NTDP) at the Asian Institute of Management. Tourism Undersecretary for Tourism Development Daniel G. Corpuz said that along with sun and beach tourism‚ the industry must promote other things the Philippines has to offer: nature tourism‚ cultural
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