Dear Anna‚ In this letter I will be responding to a peer review you made on my personal narrative. I would like to begin by thanking you for reviewing my narrative and assisting me in improving it. You pointed out certain things I overlooked while completing my first draft and made some helpful suggestions. Throughout the letter I will be addressing the concerns and suggestions you made on my peer review. I will be addressing issues concerning the organization and structure‚ the introduction‚ thesis
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The peer teaching lesson I created was on graphing through problem solving in an inquiry-based environment. I had a broad idea of what I wanted to accomplish‚ and with the help of my professor‚ peers‚ and host teacher I was able to create the lesson that accomplished the concept I wanted to sharpen. My host teacher gave me some ideas to keep the students engaged‚ because she was afraid if there was a lot of wait time that the students would get out of hand. My professor gave me the idea of showing
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Intraocular pressure (IOP) variations after switching from latanoprost to bimatoprost in open-angle glaucoma patients Introduction: In the world glaucoma is the second leading cause of irreversible. It is a optic neuropathy disease characterized by loss of retinal ganglion cells and axons resulting in a characteristic and distinctive appearance of optic disc‚ associated with loss of visual function. Elevated intraocular pressure (IOP) is the main risk factor and the only one that can be modified
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HSM 240 April 6‚ 2013 Benefit Types Checkpoint The United Way is an agency that helps families out in ways to improve their current living situations by various programs. It is the leadership and support organization for the network of nearly 1‚800 community-based United Ways in 40 countries and territories. We advance the common good by focusing on improving education‚ helping people achieve financial stability‚ and promoting healthy lives‚ and by mobilizing millions of people to give‚ advocate
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Professor Turley Writing 150 Section 5 25 September 2012 The Pressures of Finding Salvation Langston Hughes’ story “Salvation” is one that raises many questions about his life and childhood experiences. Hughes patterns this story to portray the pressures that caused his faith to be lost. Hughes sat on the mourners’ bench waiting for God to save him but‚ due to these pressures‚ he chose to stand and pretend that he found his salvation. Pressure is the influences of outside sources that convince you to
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Peer Review Worksheet Your Name Writer’s Name: Read the essay completely once. Then‚ read it again taking all of the following into consideration. Be honest‚ constructive‚ and appropriate in your comments Read objectively Do not offer comments like “Cool‚” Great‚” “I liked it‚” or anything else that does not include a scholarly explanation or justification for the comment Feedback is important‚ especially at this critical first stage Help your classmate think outside the box; does what you
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Juliet Masabah Amy Manley Comp II March 20‚ 12 “A Jury of Her Peers” In a court case‚ is the intention of the crime indication for or against the convicted? While on the other hand it is used to prove the person guilty‚ also‚ it can be used to persuade in defending an act. Oppression is a cause enough to confirm civil disobedience. Our country was founded upon law breaking and rebellion against the British. Therefore began over two centuries of compromising the law‚ in big or in small ways
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The History of Blood Pressure Finding out someone’s blood pressure is very important. Johannes Müller once said‚ “The discovery of blood pressure was more important than the discovery of blood.” Someone’s blood pressure could be high‚ and no one would know. The reason being is that a person with high blood pressure‚ also known as hypertension‚ will usually have no symptoms. High or low blood pressure cannot be detected without being measured. High blood pressure could cause heart attacks‚ strokes
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systolic blood pressure? Systolic blood pressure is the pressure exerted against artery walls created when the heart contracts to push oxygenated blood throughout the body. As blood pressure is represented by 2 numbers‚ systolic blood pressure is the upper number. A normal systolic blood pressure is 120 or below although it largely depends on the physical properties and capabilities of the individual. Q 2) what do you understand by the term diastolic blood pressure? Diastolic blood pressure indicates
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energy store. Pressure ulcers develop when a large amount of pressure is applied to an area of skin over a short period of time. Or‚ they can occur when less force is applied but over a longer period of time. The extra pressure disrupts the flow of blood through the skin. Without a blood supply‚ the affected area of skin becomes starved of oxygen and nutrients. It begins to break down‚ leading to the formation of an ulcer. These are the most common areas which are at risk of pressure ulcers they
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